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  • November 5, 2013 at 8:08 pm in reply to: Zero Level (NaNoWriMo) #33403

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    November 3, 2013 at 8:01 pm in reply to: Keric’s NOT A Challenge Gallery #33336

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    That left leg is a little off. Sometimes it’s better to stretch out a head to make a thigh than count on the limited body options.

    November 3, 2013 at 5:07 pm in reply to: Zero Level (NaNoWriMo) #33327

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    November 2, 2013 at 8:39 pm in reply to: Zero Level (NaNoWriMo) #33302

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    November 2, 2013 at 2:01 pm in reply to: The Library of Dobesq (Nanowrimo) #33293

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    The uncle is a great opportunity for some world-building. What does he trade? Where were his whereabouts? Why was he to be away for so long? Could we preview Dobesq (maybe a souvenir from that?)?

    Even if these details are inconsequential, they can give the reader a sense of the characters’ world and their place in it. For example, in the first scene of The Searchers, John Wanye’s character visits his brother’s house on the frontier, talks about hte Civil War, gives gifts to his brother’s children (a cheap gold necklace, a medal awarded to mercenaries) and talks to them about troubles with the Comanche.

    Just something to think about.

    November 1, 2013 at 9:05 pm in reply to: Mallowford Stories #33277

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    And then what happened?

    November 1, 2013 at 8:58 pm in reply to: “Anyone?”, 2013 edition #33276

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    I started mine under Superhero Fiction. My outline calls for 20 chapters, each about 3,000 words.

    Any feedback would be appreciated.

    October 29, 2013 at 8:48 pm in reply to: “Anyone?”, 2013 edition #33169

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    I’ll do one too. I’m working on a bank of characters so I’ll post mine with a story. But I only want to post on these forums.

    I’ll start Nov. 1.

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