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Ahh everything is overwhelming. I love that assimilator alex. Maybe it’ll look a lil’ menacing if you put more smaller legs on it’s tail, so it could walk better maybe? and also for diggin’ on the human’s back. bad ass…

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Ahhh… i’ve been busy for just a couple of days and now the progress is excellent! everything seems perfect guys very nice job. BTW here’s my take on Shu Ji.

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nice pencils!

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i think your items are pretty exciting, but perhaps people may just have been someplace else this past week..

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i see… how about others just do line drawings, others color, and then the shading… it’d be faster i think. perhaps.

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i see… point taken..

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How are we gonna do this? I mean can we use other softwares or means other than HM? ‘This could get pretty complicated if we use HM only.

Also maybe we can use this thread for posting panel submissions, but every whole page would be on a separate thread, to make it more orderly.

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wow. perfect script. i can see the images running in my mind.

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CooL… !

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poor souls…castrated then left their asses to be kicked by the heros. but wait. i’ve read in iscarioto’s that cyborg who tried raping a hongkong girl…

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that’s a great looking cyborg. however, especially among males, who in their right mind would ever allow their own private parts to be removed? except maybe when they’re drugged or being psychologically altered.

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Well this one’s inspired by a recent read….. This may not be included but i like the theme though so i’ll post it anyway…

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New York
YEARS after the WAR:

Different colors streaked the skies as F-18 fighters showed off strike maneuvers, breaking the speed of sound a couple times over, roaring thunderclaps. “Daddy!”, the little girl screamed as she cringed from the explosions. “Please take me home!”.

Orange and rainbow colors burst against the starless night sky as fireworks explode, eerily resembling the orange laser cannon discharges of the triangular Ascension warships. Remembering the battles of genocidal level he’s forced to watch as a boy, helpless…

“We’re here to celebrate Heroes’ Day, Little Darling.. Not just yet..”

His daughter calmed in his arms as he picked her up and held her tight.
The F-22 Raptors dipped and whirl synchronously. Perfect unison.

“Dad?”

“Honey?”

“Why do we celebrate this day, Daddy?”

“Heroes day?” His little girl’s lips pouted and he couldn’t help but smile. Anything wrong she hated to get. But with his head he motioned to the flying fighters, prompting her to look above again. “Heroes give their lives to protect those they love. That’s how we won the war against the Machines.”

A sudden lump of sadness rose in his throat, made him pause. “Protecting our people, your grandma died. We were losing the war. The Legionnaires were too strong. And we were outnumbered. Our petty weapons are no match for theirs. Couldn’t even get through their armor and shields. But your Grandma had a brave and generous idea. You know, she’s an “empty vessel”. As much as she was strong, her powers had their limits. Taking down two legionnaires with brute strength, she noticed that those triangular ships above were what actually controlled the legionnaire’s shields. But the ships were impenetrable with our missiles and guns. Unless….

“She flew one of the F-22’s, along with the other pilots. She crashed her fighter into one of the Ascension ships, as she thought maybe a whole fighter plane could break through. It worked and it blew their ships. The rest followed through. It was a tearful sight, as F-22’s crashed onto the triangular ships. And the Legionnaires were unable to fight with those warriors, glad with dying to save everyone else.”

The little girl’s eyes wide and shining watched the fighters showing off above them, in a military display. In his arms she sat tall. “And I am named after Grandma?”

“Your name. You are named after a hero.”

“I wanna be one, too.”

“Like grandma?”

“Yes, I wanna be a hero, too.”

He smiled at her as his daughter looked at him with a serious expression on her face, a perfect mirror image of her grandma.

But he blinked back tears when she looked away.

He hoped that his little girl never got a chance to be a hero.

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nope not really… i just use it as an example to show what i have in mind. not the actual timeline, which is all up to you guys.

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That augmentation Awesome…

The costume part mentioned by JR made sense… as well as the stolen armour theme suggested by Iscarioto…

The timeline i was having in mind basically looks like this….

POSSIBLE TIMELINE:

ASC YR ( – 7 ) Jonathon Reischek launched the Ascension Program
ASC YR ( – 5 ) Ascension’s First Recruits
ASC YR ( – 4 ) Discovery of “Empty Vessel” (MT-VS7)
??? – ASC YR 00 Origins
ASC YR 00 The Invasion of Hongkong
ASC YR 00 MONTH 4 The Tunnel Massacre
ASC YR 00 MONTH 5 Survivor’s Escape to Mainland
ASC YR 01 The Battle of San Sham Road
ASC YR 02 The RedHand Resistance
ASC YR 03

..Which would serve as guides on plot points where we can build up on our story… I think this is vague enough to still encourage the creativity of everybody, yet clear enough as a guide so we’ll not get too confused or meshed up, if you know what i’m thinking…
And also, we could always remove or add in between as we go along…. so that’s just a sample and a suggestion. It’s still up to everybody to approve of this..

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@Iscarioto said:

Alex, that’s inspired! Love it!

Yeah, I’d like to think I’m not too picky about what can and can’t go, nobody has set a foot wrong at all in my mind.

If anything, I’d like to encourage people to use their own narrative to advance the story. If it’s something that doesn’t work then the next writer to post can rectify it. And I mean, as the stories so far have been looseish with the timeline, if say, someone posts the group steals a boat and sails over to Kowloon, someone who has written about life down in the subway tunnel can still post that out of sequence without too much canon issues

We are awesome

When i reread i guess i’ve done a slight mistake in details in my character’s story, unless there’s a believable explanation. Well, i checked on Hong Kong’s map and Stanley is like a couple of rides away from the location of the Consulate. And both our character’s were rescued by the same person! Yeah I know. We can correct this anytime.

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