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Mr. VaudevilleParticipantMantis
Flagship hero number three, Kazuko Haraguchi was tragically orphaned in a chemical explosion in her native Japan as a child – an accident which caused her to develop infrared and ultraviolet sight, and the ability to hear ultrasound frequencies. Taken in by the Order of Divine Assassins and given genetically enhanced reflexes and agility, she was brainwashed and trained in multiple martial arts to become a mindless killing machine.
The Order’s programming was eventually undone by the Jetman after several violent encounters, and after proving herself as the hero under the name ‘Mantis’ she became a founding member of the IFL.
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Mr. VaudevilleParticipantThe Jetman
Second on the flagship roster, Jerome Järvinen uses technology – namely a winged jetpack and suit of versatile power armour – to fight crime from the skies as ‘the Jetman’. A blonde haired, blue eyed man from Finland, this former military test pilot and current CEO of Järvinen Enterprises created the International Freedom League and recruited the other founding members.
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Mr. VaudevilleParticipantParagon
The first flagship hero of the VSU (Vaudeville Superhero Universe – I literally just made that up), Chris Petrakis is a mountainous Greco-American man who possesses a mutant myostatin gene that grants him incredible superhuman strength, endurance, and durability. A veteran hero of some experience, all-round nice guy, and second founding member of the International Freedom League.
As one of the most recognised and popular superheroes in the world, he fights crime and threats to the Earth as ‘Paragon, the pinnacle of man.’
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Mr. VaudevilleParticipantFantastic Orc character. Always really impressed with your work!
Mr. VaudevilleParticipanti remade velocity on funk machine post i thought id post it here 2 i chose her before i read the bit about you wanting someone to remake her which is weird hahah here is the full post – here is my version of Velocity ! the reason i chose here is because i haven’t seen that many women speedsters and i liked her story i would really like to make her family in your world and make a story with you around them if youd let me. let me know what you think p.s i like to think of this as a younger velocity lol
Yes! This is brilliant. I think I’m going to start re-making my older designs, and I’ll use this as the basis for her new look.
You have my permission to use the character however you like, and to create as many stories as you want. Go nuts. 😉
Mr. VaudevilleParticipantNotes: I’ve been looking forward to creating this guy for a while. My second speester character. While Velocity got her powers in an accident, this guy is a mutant and was born with his powers.
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Alias: The Jade Tornado
Legal Name: Jiang Lin
Gender: Male
Age: 30
Ethnicity: Chinese
Occupation: Travel Agent/Administrator; Tour Guide; Former Chef; Superhero.
Height: 5′ 9″
Body Type: Stocky, Toned
Hair Colour: Black
Hair Type: Long, Straight
Eye Colour: Brown
Skin Colour: Pale tan
Species: MutantPowers and Abilities
Powers: Super speed, superhuman reflexes, enhanced durability/toughness.
Details/Limitations: Able to travel at incredible, blistering speeds; known to be capable of exceeding Mach 3 (2301.81mph) without breaking a sweat. His superhuman reflexes allow him to keep up mentally with his own physical speed, and grant a level of agility and acrobatic skill beyond normal humans – able to dodge even high velocity bullets with relative ease. As his body is adapted to the pressure of travelling at super speed, he has an unusually tough muscular and skeletal structure, allowing him to shrug off most physical blows that would seriously hurt, or even kill, a normal human.
Abilities/Skills: Communication, diplomacy, acrobatics, Kung fu, Escrima/stick fighting, first aid, cooking.
Costume: Heat resistant, waterproof bodysuit with mask, gloves, and boots; supportive wrist and calf wraps; belt and waist sash; steel-rimmed hat with reinforced frame; cape.
Weapons: Extendable baton/staff attached to belt, steel-rimmed hat can be thrown as a disc like weapon (though rarely used in this way).
Gadgets/Tech: –
Physical Weaknesses: Not much defensive gear/armour, not especially strong when moving at regular speed.
Mental/Emotional Weaknesses: Vulnerable to psychic attack.Personality and Relationships
Primary Traits: Noble, friendly, witty, honourable, charismatic, mysterious.
Likes: Cooking, travel, cinema, martial arts, plants, justice.
Dislikes: Criminals, factories, western food, corruption, sweatshops.
Habits/Quirks: A friendly, approachable, and popular individual with an excellent sense of humour, he spent most of his young adult life working as a chef and avoiding confrontation as much as possible to avoid revealing his powers. Eventually no longer able to stand by and do nothing as crime levels only increased, he created the Jade Tornado costume in secret over a number of years and began fighting crime. The popularity of his costumed persona skyrocketed overnight, which led to him moving to a bigger city and taking a day job at a travel agency with more ‘sociable’ hours. He still follows his passion for cooking in private, and fills up as much of his time with hobbies as possible. When in costume, he adopts a much more reserved, dignified, and enigmatic persona than in his civilian life.
Fears: Full scale war between superhumans and humanity, needles, enclosed spaces.
Family: Jiang Suyin (mother) Jiang Mei (sister).
Romantic Interests: Wei Shun (girlfriend)
Allies: International Freedom League
Affiliation: Indo-Asian Superhuman Assembly, Terran Defence Corps.
Rivals/Nemesis: –
Enemies: Tau Magi, Church of the Fractured Dawn, The Shadowguard, The Lawless Earth Network.Origin
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Mr. VaudevilleParticipantYour outfits are always so well designed, especially regarding colour combinations common to the era.
I think the box coat redisign is a great success.
As a jazz man, I really appreciate the 40’s stuff. And I love the ‘noir’ theme, too.
Mr. VaudevilleParticipantThanks, Trekkie!
Mr. VaudevilleParticipantProfile
Alias: The Brass Bison
Legal Name: Aleksandr Khaberov
Gender: Male
Age: 34
Ethnicity: Russian
Occupation: Criminal; Mercenary; Former Convict
Height: 6′ 5″
Body Type: Muscular, Bulky
Hair Colour: Mousy
Hair Type: Short, straight
Eye Colour: Brown
Skin Colour: White/Pale
Species: HumanPowers and Abilities
Powers: Super strength, enhanced durability and stamina.
Details/Limitations: Exoskeletal power armour augments natural muscle strength and stamina to well beyond normal human levels, allowing him to stand toe-to-toe with likes of Paragon and other supernaturally strong adversaries. The armour also provides incredibly strong protection against physical damage.
Abilities/Skills: Extortion, intimidation, wrestling, boxing, Sambo.
Costume: Customised suit of bulletproof, impact resistant power armour; horned helmet; heat resistant spandex underclothes.
Weapons: Ultra-strong alloy horns, twin compact shoulder mounted missile launchers.
Gadgets/Tech: Power armour enhances strength and stamina, helmet contains communications gear (including police scanner) and voice modulation technology.
Physical Weaknesses: Powerless without armour, apart from peak human strength/conditioning.
Mental/Emotional Weaknesses: Not very intelligent, vulnerable to psychic attack, mental trickery, and misdirection/illusion.Personality and Relationships
Primary Traits: Aggressive, thuggish, brutal, intimidating, simplistic, unintelligent.
Likes: Physical conflict and violence, exercise, easy money, sports, causing fear/intimidation, women.
Dislikes: Prison guards, police, authority, intellectual pursuits, mathematics, superheroes.
Habits/Quirks: An absolute mountain of a man, possessing extraordinary strength and size for a regular human, but little in the way of brainpower. Formerly incarcerated for trying to extort small businesses and running a street gang, as well as for his participation in illegal, underground cage fights. Known for organising similar fights while in prison, he was feared and somewhat respected by fellow inmates. When selected for a secret military program due to his prodigious size and strength, he found himself used as a guinea pig to test a prototype suit of experimental power armour – until he was stolen along with the armour by members of the Lawless Earth Network. Eagerly accepting his new freedom and the chance to become a truly feared criminal, he customised the armour and became The Brass Bison, a key enforcer for the L.E.N. and dangerous villain in his own right. In combat, his favoured method of attack is to simply charge the enemy down. Tends to suit obvious crimes, such as robbing bank vaults or armoured cars, extortion, etc.
Fears: Unknown
Family: Unknown
Romantic Interests: –
Allies: Warhead, Tarantula, Alley Cat, Monsoon, The Botanist, The Huntress, I.Q.
Affiliation: Lawless Earth Network
Rivals/Nemesis: –
Enemies: United States Sentinels, Society of European Superheroes, Indo-Asian Superhuman Assembly, Apex Squad, Iron Patrol.Origin
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Mr. VaudevilleParticipantInteresting work!
I like how your characters from each royal family/house share the same insignia/crest, and the detail you’re putting into the backstory. Keep going!
Mr. VaudevilleParticipantHey, your works really coming along. You’ve got some interesting characters.
Thanks!
It’s good to hear that I’m actually improving, and it’s not just me who thinks so.
Mr. VaudevilleParticipantProfile
Alias: I.Q.
Legal Name: Isaac Quinn
Gender: Male
Age: 31
Ethnicity: English
Occupation: Criminal Mastermind; Supervillain
Height: 6′ 1″
Body Type: Athletic, Solid
Hair Colour: Black
Hair Type: Short, Messy
Eye Colour: Steel Blue
Skin Colour: White/Pale
Species: MutantPowers and Abilities
Powers: Superhuman intelligence/mentality, innate capability, levitation/telekinesis.
Details/Limitations: With an I.Q. beyond measurable levels, he possesses incredible intelligence and mentality. This allows him to absorb vast amounts of information and create highly complex and devious plans, schemes, and traps. His mental processes are so fast that he can react with almost superhuman speed, able to predict and evade all but the fastest attacks, and even dodge bullets if completely focused. Additionally, his mind is so advanced that he has a form of innate capability – the ability to learn, know, or understand something without needing to study it – as well as enough telekinetic ability to levitate himself and/or several small objects. Though he has no telepathic abilities, he is immune to most forms of psychic attack.
Abilities/Skills: Strategy, planning, espionage, business, martial arts, science, electronics, hacking, mathematics, mechanics, acrobatics, driving, gunplay, psychology, manipulation.
Costume: Bulletproof, impact-resistant body armour, gauntlets, and boots over a fireproof bodysuit; reinforced headgear/mask; lightweight, easily removable cloak/cape; utility belt.
Weapons: –
Gadgets/Tech: Belt pouches contain basic medical supplies, tracking devices, smoke pellets, etc., along with various different communication devices or remote controls for traps/electronics/henchmen as required.
Physical Weaknesses: Only average strength, despite lightning fast reflexes.
Mental/Emotional Weaknesses: Cowardly nature/fear of physical confrontation.Personality and Relationships
Primary Traits: Cunning, inventive, manipulative, cowardly, dastardly, cautious.
Likes: Proving his superiority, humiliating superheroes, gourmet food, reading, science, discovery.
Dislikes: Superheroes, being outsmarted, ordinary humans, non-intellectual persuits.
Habits/Quirks: Responsible for the creation of the Lawless Earth Network, and partly responsible for the formation of the Shadowguard. Often the mastermind behind the actions of his fellow LEN members, he is known for orchestrating elaborate schemes and traps to capture superheroes. Relying on henchmen and manipulating his colleges into doing his dirty work, he rarely confronts superheroes himself. Despite his tendency to flee from physical danger when confronted, his near superhuman reflexes allow him to outmatch much more physically powerful opponents in combat.
Fears: Physical confrontation, disease.
Family: Unknown
Romantic Interests: –
Allies: Warhead, Tarantula, Alley Cat, Monsoon, The Botanist, The Huntress, The Brass Bison
Affiliation: Lawless Earth Network, Shadowguard. (Also has loose ties with the Mutant Syndicate)
Rivals/Nemesis: –
Enemies: United States Sentinels, Society of European Superheroes, Indo-Asian Superhuman Assembly, Apex Squad, Iron Patrol.Origin
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Mr. VaudevilleParticipantI really like that you’re posting alternate versions of the costumes, keep that up!
The winter lake looks excellent, too. Great stuff.
Mr. VaudevilleParticipantExcellent work, as usual.
Of all the forum regulars, your style is definitely the most similar to what I’d like to achieve, and therefore I’ve learned the most from you so far.
Cody (Code-Blue) is superb.
What’s Sidesteps glowing hoop about? 😛
As always, super jealous of your costuming.
Mr. VaudevilleParticipantA final bump, i guess no one wants any thing redrawing
You’re more than welcome to have a go at any of the characters from my gallery, especially some of the earlier designs from when I was a little less skilled. Major costume changes are totally acceptable!
If I had to choose a character, I would really like to see a new and better costume for my female speedster ‘Velocity’. As long as it uses purple as a main colour, anything goes! I don’t really mind which character you want to do, though.
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