[LullabyOfTheSin]

if jr didn’t commented, i would say that this cop is perfect.

But now, i have to say, that this character is perfect anyway.

Big (+1) for you for making this boomstick holding cop!

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Both Danni and Lili look cute/beautyful as always(+1)

shading at high lvl (+1)

faces at super high lvl (+1)

Not-a-venom hoodie… i died (from laughter) (+9000)

overall: JR favorite characters are mine favorite characters (actually, all characters i see are my favorite. Can’t decide only at one/two, like always) (+1)

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Running girl in short: Great overall , no flaws found (+1), also didnt noticed what you fixed. Any hints?

Another Bad Guy in short: Looks truly evil, or at least truly bad, nice! However, the left fist seems to be odd for me. It’s hard to describe this, but i think there is something wrong with it. But it’s premade pose, and also i may be wrong about that hand, so it’s great and wonderful creation anyway (+1)

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Quite scary “face” i must say (+1)

interesting scarecrow-like desing (+1)

i also like how he is actually the “good” guy (+1)

overall: nice one!

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Not sure if i ever writed it, but anyway: Your character desing power is over 9000!

Everyone you create is unique (+1)

Everyone you create have great clothes/costume/lack of clothes or costume (+1)

I can nearly see the personality of characters you made so far (+1)

Your color picking/matching sense is off the charts for me (+1)

The Spectrum Team/Group is fantastic (+1)

Overall: Ave DiCicatriz! (+1)

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Marking plague is spreading! (sorry for starting it :< )

Anyway, Father Water (pun name inspired by “Mother Earth”, since he is, well, water-typed superhero, and he is male also) looks really good

costume (+1)

shading and highlighting seems ok/good (+1)

smoke…? Why the smoke? Is that a suggestion that he likes to smoke a lot? (?!)

Overall: Great, no major flaws (no minor flaws also, or maybe i am blind and tired after work, who knows)

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Hey Luis

i like fanfiction of any sort, and characters from yours seems to be quite interesting and original. would be nice to see and read story behind other characters

as for any sort of criticism or observation… hmm… if it’s possible, try to use a little brighter shade of grey (or black, not sure how to say it). Ileana Vane helmet and other two guys chest clothes are so dark i have to watch really carefully to see details. On first view, these pieces llooks for me like black shape.

However, maybe only i see it like that (or maybe its something with my monitor), so you don’t have to do it, it’s only my personal, maybe wrong, suggestion

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I’m not good at jugding the fashion (especialy woman fashion), but still i can see when someone makes unique and interesting clothes in HM (at least i think i can), and you are doing it really, really good!

big +1 to your whole topic and everything in it

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<steals jr words, beacuse that’s so true>

and also i must say, you really got inspired by the song. art and music fits greatly to each other

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Bad Cat… Why i have felling that he fight with criminals by coming into their houses and pushing everything off the furniture? Even his smile says “i hope you don’t have anything made of glass at home”

Seriously now, costume is great, as always when you create somethig (+1)

it (the costume) also fits the cat-man in my opinion (+1)

overall: wonderful piece of half-cat!

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vampyryist is right, this is really good start!

Wait a moment…

Papyrus57

Hot Girl looks like Chara (at least for me)

…

<these facts fills you with determination>

And besides that:

hell knight looks truly demonic, and thats really nice

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Your shading is wonderful! (+1)

but…

Your highlighting (or however is called the making-something-brighter) is on godly level for me. I’m always having hard time using it, so i respect that even more (+2)

also, poses really good (and the way you said you are making sure they are good is also good) (+1)

costumes/clohtes for characters are also amazing (+1)

style and color desing of each character great (+1)

overall: AMS. Just AMS (+1,2)

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Didn’t noticed it before (or just didn’t wanted to look there to much), but yea, now it’s better

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I love that some of your characters and color sets you use for them are really unique, that’s what i like really much (+1)

what you create in HM matches for me perfectly with text story/backstory you write here, and thats also good (+1)

also, nice diversity among characters! (+1)

overall: great work so far, keep it going! (+1)

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You got nice ideas for horror/zombie characters! Keep going and creating new stuff

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