[Kaylin88100]

@Herr D said:

We may be back to regularly abnormal now.

And this, ladies and gentlemen, is why this forum exists.

[Kaylin88100]

Nice riding pose, but I think it needs to be either all black lines, or all coloured lines. It looks strange to have black lines on the rider and grey on the pegasus.

[Kaylin88100]

How did you get the cool effect on the background where – I think – the lines seem to be slightly off?

[Kaylin88100]

Yeah, I wouldn’t have thought of making a skirt that way either. Brilliant!

[Kaylin88100]

Very atmospheric.

[Kaylin88100]

Nice. I might use these some time.

[Kaylin88100]

Have you read Hitch-Hikers’ Guide to the Galaxy? He sounds a lot like Zaphod Beeblebrox…

[Kaylin88100]

Nice! I like the nail polish, and the 3D effect of the belt. Not sure how well those two centaur bodies fit together, though. You might want to make it look more like the man is behind the queen rather than next to her, which would make her body really short!

[Kaylin88100]

Thanks for the suggestion, Ximero. I’m currently in the process of completely rewriting the opening, so I’ll think about that section when I get to it.

[Kaylin88100]

Nice posing, but the crotch area looks a bit…strange.

[Kaylin88100]

It’s certainly a lot clearer in color. Greyscale might work, though.

[Kaylin88100]

Great idea! I’d do the same, but I don’t have access to many of my old creations after several times of losing all my saves. It’s great to see how much you’ve progressed as an artist, in really quite a short time – how long is it since you made the original?

[Kaylin88100]

It’s a bug, I had it happen to me once. So annoying! Don’t think I had any items disappear, though. They might just have been hidden behind others. It messes the layering up as well.

[Kaylin88100]

Nice atmosphere on the Snow image, but then I scroll down and WOAH!

[Kaylin88100]

Nice start, welcome to the forums.

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