Jackal

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  • in reply to: The Gallery #27116

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    I’m a sucker for street-level brawlers who aren’t afraid to get their hands dirty. Good job!

    in reply to: Bad-People’s Heroes(and Villains) #27115

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    Black Devil sure looks like someone I’d want on my crimefighting team, even if I wouldn’t bring him home to meet my parents!

    in reply to: LoRdUs Heroes (my characters) #27114

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    I’m liking the latest few designs. Very Warhammer-esque.

    in reply to: Nug’s Creations #27113

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    What Myro and Torog said!

    in reply to: A couple creations of mine… #27112

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    I’m loving all of these. The Inheritant is a seriously cool concept.

    in reply to: Word Association Game #27111

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    (Kilts are actually Scottish but yeah)

    Wales.

    in reply to: Calvary_Red’s Gallery #27017

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    OK, that is superb. Reminds me a little bit of Captain America, which is by no means a bad thing, but somehow still manages to look badass in its own right. I’m loving the chest insignia, too!

    in reply to: CantDraw Gallery of Bad Art #27016

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    Lone Star is fantastic! Making a patriotic American-themed costume look new and original is pretty difficult, but you’ve done a sterling job of it, and bonus points for making a Texas-based superhero that isn’t a hideously stereotyped cowboy!

    in reply to: LoRdUs Heroes (my characters) #27015

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    Got to say, I’m mightily impressed with your work! Hammer Knight and Zedro are interesting, and Kamikaze’s a simple concept but very well-executed. Overall though, I’d have to say Captain Philippines is my favourite – I love country/flag-based superheroes that aren’t some tired variation on the “All-American Super-Patriot” trope.

    in reply to: Tinker’s Corner #27014

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    Mind out of the gutter there, Tink. You know exactly what I meant. :D

    in reply to: HEROS, ALL #27013

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    Miracle Man is great. I think the thing I like most about your characters is the names – I like the ones that makes me think “Now why didn’t I think of that?”, and Burn Unit is a particularly fine example.

    Keep up the good work!

    in reply to: Therianthrope’s Characters #27011

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    Oof, that White Rabbit is giving me the creeps. Reminds me of one of Doctor Moreau’s creations from the League of Extraordinary Gentlemen.

    in reply to: PLANET AMS #27010

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    Ha, funnily enough one of my characters is a Scottish, red-headed lass with fire-based powers. I like the look of Beltane though – the freckles are cute!

    in reply to: Jackal’s Showcase #27003

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    That is absolutely fantastic, Torog! Not at all how I envisioned WWII-era Spitfire, but definitely better than anything I could ever hope to produce!

    Anyway, since we’re on the subject of WWII-era heroes, here’s another design – one I’m actually rather proud of.

    http://i41.tinypic.com/j8324h.jpg

    Pierre Cortez ran away from home as a young boy in order to escape from his abusive father, an alcoholic who would regularly take out his frustrations on his young son. He eventually came across a traveling circus, and as the ringmaster took a liking to him he was allowed to stay, initially finding work cleaning the animal cages before progressing to circus acts himself.

    After the outbreak of the Second World War, the circus was used as a front for the French Resistance, and Pierre, drawing inspiration from characters like the Scarlet Pimpernel and Zorro as well as tales from the Free French SAS of the daring commando raids carried out by the costumed heroes of Britain and France, donned a costume in the colours of his country’s flag, styling himself as a symbol of French vengeance and striking fear into the hearts of occupying Nazi forces as Le Liberateur.

    An Olympic-level gymnast, athlete and acrobat in the absolute peak of human condition, his skill was such that he was believed by many other costumed adventurers of the time to be a superhuman despite having no powers to speak of. He was a proficient marksman, skilled not only with firearms but also in the fields of archery and knife-throwing, and as well as being a formidable hand-to-hand combatant he was also a highly capable strategist and tactician, skilled in both interrogation and intimidation; as rumors of his exploits spread further even Axis superhumans were wary of him, and Adolf Hitler reportedly considered him a more credible threat than Spitfire.

    After the war he saw no point in retaining his alter-ego, returning to his old job as a circus performer until his quiet retirement to the coast of Normandy. However, his legacy lives on in the 21st century as his granddaughter, Lucille, has not only taken up the mantle of Le Liberateur but has discovered that unlike Pierre, she possess superpowers.

    in reply to: Jackal’s Showcase #26976

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    Thanks a lot for the feedback guys!


    @Torog
    – Go right ahead! I’m definitely going to try tweaking Spitfire’s design a little bit myself, but I’d be interested to see what you came up with – that goes for everything else, by the way. If anyone fancies taking a stab at one of my characters, then feel free.

    @WMDBASSPLAYER – I was hoping the gloves would disguise the holsters and just make them look like drop leg pouches, but I guess they’re a bit moot considering he doesn’t have that much in the way of equipment to carry. And yes, Rorschach was one of the primary influences for London Fog but now that you mention it he does look pretty Sandman-esque doesn’t he?

    Anyway, I think that’s enough heroes to be going on with. Let’s get some villians up in here.

    http://i39.tinypic.com/2edv393.png

    First off – Señor Muerte, a super-powered drug lord who became one of the most powerful men in South America through the illicit fortune he inherited from his father, who was assassinated by US special forces. With the collapse of the Colombian cartels in the 1990s, he shifted his base of operations to Mexico, killing off the competition whose loyalty he couldn’t buy – intel gathered by the Policía Federal Ministerial suggests he’s personally overseen more than 80% of the major drug trafficking operations into the United States since the 1990s, and he’s allegedly been involved with Brazilian and Nicaraguan arms dealers in the past.

    A formidable hand-to-hand combatant and skilled marksman who is rumoured to have been financed by the CIA, he possess powerful psychic and psionic abilities including extrasensory perception, telepathy, telekinesis, and mind control, which many conspiracy theorists believe is related to the Agency’s interest in the effects of drugs on the human mind, as with operations such as MKULTRA.

    http://i44.tinypic.com/sw5u14.png

    When Señor Muerte wants someone dead, they end up dead. If he can’t be bothered to do it himself, he sends El Verdugo.

    Like his employer, the one referred to in hushed whispers as “El Gordo” (though never to his face) is shrouded in mystery but he is known to be personally responsible for at least 300 deaths and is more than likely guilty of the hundreds of others he is suspected of.

    Standing at over six feet tall and weighing in excess of 350 pounds, El Verdugo a reasonably skilled hand-to-hand fighter, an experienced sumo wrestler, and has extensive knowledge of torture and murder techniques; he also possess superhuman strength and durability. Disdaining the use of guns in spite of his weight and their availability, he prefers to dispatch his opponents with blunt objects like machetes, meat cleavers, and occasionally lengths of rope and/or chain. His most common weapon of choice is an enormous battle axe that five lesser men would struggle to lift together; his preferred method of execution is reportedly decapitation, and other unconfirmed reports state that he has been known to eat his victims.

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