[hawk007]

A Goblin Warrior. They are very complicated. They can talk by the age of 1, and start battle training when they can walk (which is usually around 3). Their whole civilization is based off of war. Each kingdom has 3 to 4 clans of Goblins. They fight for land. They usually stay away from humans, but every once and a while, a few goblins prey on them. They are smart, and are very agile. They use this to their advantage. In stead of bulking up on heavy armor like normal soldiers, they have light armor. So, while this is less protective, it allows them more speed and agility.

[hawk007]

You are very good! And what I like about these are that though they aren’t the best on here, they are pretty original, and you’ve gotten better at that as you’ve been creating more. I don’t know if you want to know how to do the lighting. if you do, you can PM me. I’m not very good at it, but I know how to do it.

[hawk007]

@Calvary_Red said:

I’m I the only one who thinks that this looks like green lantern?

[hawk007]

Thanks!

[hawk007]

@WMDBASSPLAYER said:

Dude, if this stuff sucks, I can’t wait to see when you really get good! Great start! Welcome to Hero Machine.

That’s what I love about this place. Everybody is honest, and really nice!

[hawk007]

Though I will admit that I’ve seen better, the creativity makes up for it. These guys are so original.

[hawk007]

@ams said:

@ hawk007 – Thanks for participating! Sure you can add some background stories, but lets keep it to about 5 or so lines. Just the meat and potatoes of who or what pissed off your characters to make them villains and of coarse, their powers. For judging, I’ll be looking for a cool original concept or idea. Your ‘machining looks just fine. Your use of items works well and your highlights are pretty good. Cheers!

Thank you so much! And everybody else is amazing. Oh, and I’m not going to add the stories here, I’m going to edit them to the original post.

[hawk007]

Skull-Fire. A person that loves to kill. He created a gun to grapple onto buildings, and two custom blades that act like boomerangs.

[hawk007]

I’ll submit some, but they probably won’t be very good, especially compared to yours. Do you want stories? For now, I won’t add them, and I’ll add them later if you want them.

Black Jack

Fallen Angel

Reactor

[hawk007]

That’s really good!

[hawk007]

Anarchangel and Archangel. I think you guys could get along.

[hawk007]

Welcome! This is actually a pretty good start, considering it is one of your first. Good start.

[hawk007]

How. Did. You. Get. So. Good.

[hawk007]

I guess it’s time to judge. Please, no one hate me for this. I’m just judging on how I think it should be.
1. prswirve, Ares
2. the.jester, Apollo
3. the.jester, Ares
4. the.jester, Artemis
5. Magus Maximus, Hercules

Sorry, Magus. But congrats, prswirve!

[hawk007]

What exactly is the Twelvian Chronicles?

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