[hawk007]

Very, very cool. But there is one thing. On the third character you posted on the first post, you did the shoulder armor behind him. Actually, they were full things that covered your entire arm. So unless you were going for something new (which is ok) it would look like the other one. But still, very, very amazing.

[hawk007]

Ok, so what’s the next character?

[hawk007]

Thanks!

[hawk007]

Thanks!

[hawk007]

You want my opinion? It is an AMAZING start. Very cool and creative.

[hawk007]

Thank you so much!

[hawk007]

Thanks!

[hawk007]

Xadrill. A mysterious warrior from a land unknown. But in his land, the warriors are also sort of half ninja. They value stealth as much as strength. He is a silent fighter, and hasn’t really chosen a side. He fights only to survive. His ship crashed here, and David has agreed to help him rebuild. He does not fight, because it doesn’t concern him. But David is trying to convince him that unless stopped, the dark king will take over his land, as well.

[hawk007]

Goo job! I didn’t choose them to win because they were girls. I just think that they were the best made.

[hawk007]

I’m so sorry, I totally forgot about this.
Ok, so in first place is Kaldath with his creation, Alisha Talmer.
In second place is JR19759, with his wizard…wizardess? Witch? Whatever it is, he’s in second place.
In third place is Kaylin88100 with her updated version of the ninja wizard.
Thanks for entering, everybody! This was really fun, and all of these were really good!
P.S. Could you guys please reply? I just want to make sure you guys saw this, at least the winners.

[hawk007]

Do you mean PG-13 as in don’t make it better, or don’t make it any worse?

[hawk007]

Pic #1 Story #1
Girl is captured at the beginning of the game. The first level is her trying to escape. The only weapons she has are weapons from the two guards she overpowered.

Pic #1 Story #2
The girl is rushing through an alien weapon factory. She is trying to find an alien that made a secret weapon to tell her where it is/find the weapon itself.

Pic #2 Story #1
A ADS (alien defense soldier) is standing over an alien, just before he kills it.

Pic #2 Story #2
A bounty hunter is questioning someone about a wanted person.

Pic #3 Story #1
At the end of the game, the girl dies the save humanity.

Pic #4 Story #1
The 3 ADS agents having a secret meeting in an alley, when they are confronted by a shady character who claims he has information on strange murders.

Pic #5 Story #1
The ADS general smiles as he watches his pet trample through the city, and laughs as he realizes that he so easily tricked all the other agents.

Pic #5 Story #2
The ADS soldier watches just before he plunges into the city to destroy the giant alien.

[hawk007]

He was a very athletic kid, but lost most of his senses when he was in a car crash. A scientist gave him back his senses, but he had to become a villain. That’s the short version. The only restrictions I have is that he keeps the wings, and the color stays the same. Oh, and he has to have a hawk or bird logo somewhere. It doesn’t matter which or where, I just want one.

[hawk007]

I guess I’ll try another one.

This is my signature character, the Hawk.

[hawk007]

Very good, especially for being new! So, the first guy is like a sci-fi zombie? Then the second is a pirate, and the third…maybe a tribal chief? Well, very good job. Remember, do not forget that you can ask for help on anything related to creating a character on here. Again, very good job

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