[Greentiger777]

[Greentiger777]

here we have a man in the year 2079 walking his pet alien cat using the latest high-tech leash.

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@Herr D said:

Judging time–oh, and belated thanks for prior congratulations. Here goes:
At the speed of light came WiFi man! MithrilFrog made a good solid character that I DO wish existed. Backplane item as energy effect was a good idea. Frankly, if there had been a background, he would have rated higher. Background is the only thing ‘missing’ compared to the others.
. . . And out of the dark, came Beta9! Greentiger made one of those characters designed to aid humans in destroying themselves. (I have to agree with Waterson’s Hobbes–mankind “doesn’t need the help.”) A black background will probably always be better than none. Though you said you couldn’t think of anything, you did actually get me to pay more attention than normal to this sort of character by virtue of the earrings. Very good. The other items as energy effects were also good choices. Or was the goatee a part of him?
. . . And from the depths in the twilight storm, came The Listener! The backplane and facial hair combined very well in that forbidding visage. I instantly had to ponder whether they were prehensile or poisonous or pretty sexy to another of it’s kind. Use of the insignia item as a genuine signal tower with built-in energy effect did something even more unexpected. It drew me in and caused me to WONDER. I couldn’t help but story a little bit. ‘He heard the signal and he came.’ I have to give this one to Luc before I’m stuck writing another story! LUC! PICK THREE! GO!

in answer to your question, the goatee was supposed to be his/her (never actually decided on the gender) fiery hair. similar to a mohawk. btw i think you made the right choice

[Greentiger777]

I can’t really think of anything to say for this one. lol especially since all the selected items are obvious. Hope you like it. congrats on winning btw

[Greentiger777]

This is Ra-bel Sung. She is a criminal on her home world of Bechlor. She was banished from her home for a serious crime. She has been sent to Earth where she must save the lives of at least 250,000 humans to repay her debt and return to Bechlor.

[Greentiger777]

A super hero has to be unique, one of kind. Not only that, but it should also be possible for the reader/watcher/whatever to connect to the character in some way. A good story and the character’s personality can help in this area

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