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So, time is rut running out and i see that topic is, sadly, dead Ah well I need advice what to do with dead body. I can extend deadline or put another picture or, what i think could be most interesting, change a rules that everyone can take any picture from my galery and make a story to it. What do you think?

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@Kaylin88100 said:

Oooh! You made a mouse!

Yes i do My idea is an animal chess.

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You know, you remaind me old chess game that was in my old computer – Battle Chess. There was a mod with fantasy (middle age) models as chess pieces with different animation for fight of every two figures. /offtop
When i am looking at this now i think that my character suit more to bishop or knight. Also i shoud not change his weapon, mace look much beter. Anyway i make proper character (not lazy reuse of old one). Hope you like it.

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Ok, two weeks past and i have a real problem because both entries take different approach and both are fantastic. If I have to choose (and i have to) i choose Weilyn story. Sorry Herr D it just my love to those kind of stories.

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So, what has happened in my head? Not much. I just wanted to make female warrior, barbarian but not primitive, looking strongly, independently and rebelliously.
But i actually have a story i created after. Not for character but for people she represent. So, she is a member of Clansmens. They live at the foot of the mountains near borders of great imperium. They create many small clans which compete and fight with each other (it is not a war but more like bar fight). Only unite against a common enemy. Idea is that they are earthbenders of some kind. They dont control earth but draw strength from it (this is why so often are barefoot). This allow they to use giant swords or axes, throwing stones and make small earthquake by pat. Thanks to this imperium dont attack them but rather seek cooperation. Real enemy of them are moutain giants.

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And here goes next challenge, my second character i think.

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such… poetic and beautiful
I have to confess that I hoped to give You a hard time with this but the way you interpreted it make me really impress. You are really very good with this.

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My firs thought: Where is Goliat?. Great picture.

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but… WOW just few line… WOW, just WOW
I am absolutely stunned. I didn’t expect so fantastic response.

Weilyn you have very nice language, vocabulary and method of telling story. You basically created plot for whole book no mention that You just make preaty interesting character based on some simple picture. I realy love world and realities you use, i see parallel to Rome conquer of Britain. It’s quite similar to what i had in mind but i will tell more after contest. Prswirve is right, it could become very interesting fantasy/pseudohistory world. I salute to your writing skills. Ow and freaking illustrations are freaking good.

Herr D, you in the other hand take quite suprising twist in your story. My reactions during reading was like: interesting, wait what, ow my its brutal, wait what, ow that was unexpect. Quite an amount of quite dark humor what i realy appreciate.

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Thanks

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Well, i think i got something for you too.

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some si -fi

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I reworked a little last armor and because i am so pround of result i put it in new post. Old version is still in my previous post.

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Thanks. Jednookie is polish term for “one-eyed thing” or “the one-eyed”. I never pay atention to name of file and alvays forget to change it to english, but in other site they usualy are not very creative.

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