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DC-LoverParticipantCharacter Design Contest 42- Public Domain Amalgamations
Spinner and Black Hood.Name: Black Spinner
Abilities: employs a powerful exoskeleton concealed beneath his costume, sticky thread-shooting gloves, and automated robot arachnids called “Nanids”,Trained in hand to hand combat.
Info: Jason Burland was a disgraced cop wrongfully accused of taking bribes from the criminal underworld. His brother, who was also an officer, decided to investagate his brothers apparent crime. Isaac Burland was found dead a week later. An apparent drive by was to blame but Jason knew better. Dawning a simple mask and costume Jason went to confront some criminals who were involved in criminal activities. Having irratated the men he was shot several times and left for dead. Luckily a kind old scientest saved him and gave him an exo-suit capable to avenge his brother.
DC-LoverParticipantName:Rainbow Arrow
Abilities: Expert Archer, Uses Multi Coloured arrowsSeptember 22, 2013 at 8:25 am in reply to: Osez Marchez avec l’obscurité (Dare to Walk with Darkness) #32013
DC-LoverParticipantOsez marcher avec l’obscurité: Episode 7
Story and Characters by DC-Lover & The Atomic Punk
Bertrand’s rage filled him as he paced around his room. He had not slept since the events only eight hours prior. He was so close to taking one of his fathers closest’s men and one of the major players in the family. But he didn’t. He hesitated. Why?
“Why did I hesitate!” Bertrand asked the reflection in the mirror as it stared back almost mocking him.
He didn’t break eye contact with the man staring back as he grew silent.
“STOP MOCKING ME!” Bertrand shouted as his fist connected with the mirror.
Glass fell into the sink as well did blood, but Bertrand just stared. His rage quickly lessoned as pain came over his hand. Pulling it away from the mirror he examined his hand. That was so stupid. Punching a mirror just because he was worried was something an idiot would do. Someone like that monkey Audere.
“Yes…Yes its his fault..” Bertrand realised as he bandaged his hand.
“No..I could still use him. But then. When he has exhausted his uses…” Bertrand said smiling to himself as he finished the bandaging.
He would have to fight through the pain if he was hoping to continue using his knives. His thoughts were interrupted by a pounding at the door.
“Qu’est-ce que tu veux!” Bertrand shouted in impulse.
Slamming the bathroom door to avoid any questions about his broken mirror he approached the bedroom door.
“Bertrand…” A quiet recognisable voice came from behind the door.
Walking towards the door cautiously, he slowly opened it up to see Jean Michelle looking distressed.
“Cousin?” Bertrand said as he looked at his cousin who was wearing bandaged over his damaged eye.
The look of terror and shame on Jenny’s face was a picture worth remembering.It was as if Jean-Michelle had a long lost twin that shared none of his useful qualities.
“I need to talk to someone Bertie.” Jean-Michelle whimpered as he stepped into Bertrand’s room.
“So talk to Papa” Bertrand snapped not wanting to see the face that he was suppose to have killed earlier.
Hiding his hand behind his back Bertrand leaned against the wall so to avoid suspicion.
“I cant…Listen..its about…” Jean Michelle said as he looked at his feet.
Bertrand reached into the back-pocket of his trouser’s and ran his finger along his pocket knife.
“What are you here about cousin? Speak up.” Bertrand asked impatiently.
“I almost died tonight. I saw…Tenebre.” He said as he pulled out a cigarette with a shaking hands.
“He had another man with him…An acrobat of some kind. I don’t know who he is but he made Alex and Charles look like weaklings.” He took a deep drag of his smoke.
This was even better than killing Jean. Bertrand realised that he had broken Jean-Michelle. Now a shell of his former self, he will fall from Don Fournier’s good books. This was much better than having to sit through Jean’s Funeral.
He smiled at the Jean-Michelle as he smoked and explained what Tenebre had done to him.
“How did you survive?” Bertrand asked as if he didn’t resent the answer.
“His partner stopped him for some reason.” Jean Michelle said as he began to calm down.
“It was just so fast….I don’t know how it happened.” Jean Michelle explained as he pulled out another cigarette.
“He say anything to you?” Bertrand asked as he rubbed his blade.
“I don’t know…”He stood up looking serious.
“Are you sure?” Bertrand asked.
“It will come back to me. Just not yet.” Jean Michelle said as he paced around the room.
This would be the perfect time to slit Jeanny’s throat, but then he would have to explain why he did so. For now he would bide his time and wait.The look of terror and shame on Jenny’s bruised and swollen face was a picture worth remembering.Francois walked down the street having only slept a few hours. He was now sitting in the park with his coffee watching the world go by once again.The warm sun shined down on Francois and the beauty of his surroundings, causing a scene of tranquility to Francois. So few people ever stopped to smell the rose’s these days and that was a shame for so many reasons. Then he spotted someone under a tree just across the path from him. It was the woman from the first night he was Audere. He got up and walked over to her. She was much prettier than he had recalled but he was sure it was her.
“Hello” he said as she raised her head from a book looking up nervous at her Francois.
“He…Hello” She responded timidly holding her book to her chest and looking at him from behind her reading glasses.
” Are you okay?” He asked her wondering how she was able to leave the house after the night she had.
“I am fine…Do I know you?” She said quietly.
Francois didn’t feel right leaving this girl alone. He decided to kill two birds with one stone and ask her out.
“Um..Maybe you can get to know me? Over dinner?” He asked as calmly as he could to settle her nerves.
“Oh…wow…Really?” She asked looking into her feet.
“Yeah..sure.” He said putting on a fake smile.
“Um…Is tonight good for you?” She asked blushing.
“Yes it is.” He smiled as she gave him her number.
“Andrea Swan. Beautiful name” He smiled as he walked away.
DC-LoverParticipantWOW! I love it.
DC-LoverParticipantI like this. Heres The Volunteer. An Irish Freedom fighter who like many of his friends failed at 1916, but unlike many of them was recruited to fight as an agent for Great Britian. In exchange no more of his comrades would be executed and would even be released from prision if he succeeded his missions and survives the war.
I am actaully working on my own little re design of him but Id love to see what you come up with.
September 7, 2013 at 7:53 pm in reply to: Osez Marchez avec l’obscurité (Dare to Walk with Darkness) #14378
DC-LoverParticipantOsez Marcher avec l’obscurité: Episode 5
Story and Characters by DC-Lover & The Atomic PunkFrancois leapt from one building to the next at great speed. His momentum carrying him through the air and gravity pulling him back to the stone roofs below him. The cold crisp night air brushing against his face made him feel at ease and alive. He recalled his childhood and when he had started free running. How afraid he was of taking that first leap from one small shipping crate from another. Now look at him. Flipping through the air and landing safely on the buildings across streets with such grace people often speculated that Audere could fly. Of course it was hard work and training that gave Audere this skill and not some super power.
Audere was returning to the scene of the crime from the last night. He hoped that his actions had left some sort of impression on that of Tenebre and it would grant them a meeting tonight. He leapt over the last gap separating him from the building just above the crime scene. As he landed on the roof he rolled so to come to a halt in his tracks. Audere approached the edge of the building and looked down to see a man in the shadows looking around suspiciously. Standing on the fire escape, Audere decided to get the man’s attention.“Bonjour monsieur.” Audere called down to the man getting his attention.
“I wonder if you..” Before Audere could finish the man threw a knife at Audere.
Dodging the knife, Audere grabbed the railing of the fire escape and swung down to the next level. The man began to run out of the alleyway, but it wasnt out of fear he ran. It was as if he was trying to lead Audere somewhere.
“Arrêter” Audere shouted as he leapt down to the ground almost botching his landing.
A slight pain ran up his leg as he looked towards the running man who was now motioning him to follow in a mocking tone.Realising that this man may not speak French Audere decided to use english for the remainder of this cat and mouse game.
“Stop” Audere shouted as he ran towards the man who dashed from the alleyway across the street.
Audere ran with great speed after the assailant or whoever this man might be. The cold air of the night was no longer welcoming to Audere as it felt as if it was trying to knock each breath out of him with each breath he took.The man had knocked over some crates in an attempt to stall Audere, but to no avail. Audere had simply leapt and flipped over the crates while maintaining his momentum. The alleys grew darker and darker as the chase continued. This man knew the alleyways far better than Francois did and therefore had the advantage, but what he didn’t realise was that nothing got Francois more excited than a good chase. He was going to enjoy this night.
Just as Audere had believed he had lost the man he spotted him in a distance waiting for Audere. Audere saw that by the man’s stance he was not running anymore. Audere didnt want to take anymore chances with this opponent and walked slowly towards him, lessening the distance between them with each step he took. It was then that man spoke.
“Are you the man responsible for last nights “Heroic” feat?” The man asked saying heroic in a rather condescending manner.
“Oui. Yes I am, if you are refering to the two thugs now in Hospital.” Audere said smiling walking slowly towards the man.
“And are you working for anyone? The Maldoni Family perhaps? Or perhaps the Don?” The man questioned as a knife almost hit Audere’s foot.
“Answer before you take another step.” He demanded as he watched Audere.
“I know not of who you speak of. I am here to meet your local vigilante…” Audere confessed as he now noticed he had been brought into a trap.
When he assumed he had the upper hand once he had backed this man into a corner he was wrong. This masked man had a good aim and was missing on purpose and with Audere almost out of breath he was not sure if he could dodge many more of this mans knives. He walked closer to the man. There was still hope that Audere could gain the upper hand here ,but he needed to take a few more steps forward. He needed to do what he did best. Talk.
“What is your name?” He said as Audere took another step forward.
“That is a rather redundant question. Do you not agree?” Audere said as he took a small step forward.
“Excuse me?” The man asked confused at this response.
“Well you are asking a masked man who he is..” He said as he took another step foward.
“…When clearly he wears a mask so as not to reveal who he is.” Audere said as he got into position for his next move.
“I would rather you not talk to me as if I was a child” The man said as he lifted another knife from his pocket.
“Very well…” Audere launched a cable towards the masked man which he dodged as it hit a cardboard box.
Looking back towards Audere he prepared to throw his knife that would surely hit Audere.
“Audere..” Audere said smiling as he pressed the retract button pulling the cable back towards him and smashing the box against the mans back.
A rather dangerous and unpredictable move Audere would agree, but he was backed into a corner and did not want to be taken out of the game this early.
He approached the man who rose back to his feet.
“And you are?” Audere asked gripping his bo staff.
“Tenebre” The man responded to Audere.
DC-LoverParticipantCharacter Design Contest 39
Name: SilverBack
Traits: Very Violent, wears an armored suit, has metal arms, and has Laser Blades
Info:A wanted mercenary with extreme pyschotic issues? Is that what they call me? Arent they nice aye? Oi! Im talking to you…Yeah you.. Want to know what Im gonna do to you if I find ya? Im gonna rip out each of your nerves and and slice each one slowly. And..Im gonna enjoy it.
DC-LoverParticipantCharacter Design Contest 39
Name: Black Flag
Traits: Believed to be unkillable, carries a pistol and a cutlass, wears a coin around his neck, and Wears the Jolly Rodger around his shoulders.
Info:Wanted: Dead or Alive
William Feeny AKA The Black Flag
Wanted for: Piracy and Theft. While no murder has been recorded we can almost assume the scoundral has done so in the past.
Reward: 500,0000
DC-LoverParticipantThis here is a little throw back to the early heros. You know the corny outfits and gimmicks.
Character Design Contest 39
Name: Golden Boy
Trait:Super speed, super Strength, Flight, and Invulnerable.
Info: Names Harper Sands. Most people call Me the Golden Boy. I’m your typical All american, Red white and blue loving, apple pie eating son of a gun. Now see I’m not here to tell ya’ll I’m the most handsome guy we got on the roster down at the American Forces HQ down in Washington, Oh no. I’m here to talk to you ladies and gents about The good Fight. See America’s got enemies and I am one of the guys the bad guys don’t want to go up against. I’m here to protect my country just like Big Ben…The hero not the clock… Is protecting our friends across the pond.
God bless America.
DC-LoverParticipantThanks Guys Few more ideas are floating around.
DC-LoverParticipant(Im on a roll)
Character Design Contest 39
Name: Blue Dove
Trait:Flight and Can generate energy shields
Info: Marcus always dreamed of flying. He trained to be a pilot,but never could get his head out of the clouds. One night he was sitting on his car watching the stars shine, when after having closed his eyes for a few minuites he heard something coming towards him. A meteorite was headed right for his car. Getting to his feet he barely escaped the cars explosion but was caught in the radiation blast from the meteorite. With the radiation from the meteorite he could fly and generate shields around him. He became the Blue dove.
DC-LoverParticipantCharacter Design Contest 39
Name: Red Eye
Trait:Expert shot, wears a goggle on his right eye that is multifunctional.
Info: The names Red eye. Red eye is the man you call when you have two things. Money and a lot of it. People say I am perhaps the most expensive assasins on the market to this day, but my price is worth my work. I have taken out dictators, politicians, celebrities, and tycoons over the Years and I am still going. Best part of my life? Having Brandy with David Bowie. Man that guy is something.
DC-LoverParticipantCharacter Design Contest 39
Name: Lime Light
Trait: Ability to shoot bolts of lime coloured light from her body,body and blood can become lumeneciant, and can fly.
Info: I always loved to be the centre of attention,Ya know? Wanted to move to L.A ,become an actress, and make something of myself. Be famous for who I am not what I looked like. My granny always told me “Jenny. One day you will be on every Television in the country, but ya may not like why your on itâ€. I always hated it when she was right. See my parents weren’t exactly normal…My father worked as a mechanic, my Mom worked as a physics teacher at the university of Chicago. Anyway enough about my life before the coma. See this is where things get weird. One day I’m walking home from school and BAM! Truck hits me. I survive, but I am comatose for a few months. But then I wake up like that and everyone’s staring at me. And I am glowing! Super Powers baby!
So now I’m fighting crime and all over the T.V doing it. Even got a funky Nickname. Lime Light.Up close
DC-LoverParticipant(Following is something I have had in storage of my ideas for some time now. Its gone from a hero, to a villain many times and has even swapped gender a few times too. Seeing as I cant enter the chracter into the contest I decided to take one more go at it and here it is. The White Rabbit.)
Name: White Rabbit
Trait: Wears a mask resembling a rabbit, has a soft voice, carries a cane that conceals a blade that has a rabbit on its hilt, wears a three piece suit, black gloves, and running shoes. Real Face unknown.
Info: Oh what have we here? A witness? Oh no no no no…We cant have that can we? Come closer to the bunny man My little girl….It will all be over soon..hehehehahhahaha
DC-LoverParticipantCharacter Design Contest 39
Name: Grey Guard
Trait: Metal Power suit, Scientifically Advanced Rail Gun(The S.A.R.G) capable of fireing several different forms of bullets, energy bolts, and can also recycle some forms of ammo, metal arm which contains constant tools that allows him to infiltrate secuirity systems, Contains a heart monitor on his suit, his helmet allows has several different functions including night vision, thermal vision, and has a light on it that.
Info: Victor Tennent was a veteran of many wars including the third American Civil war and The Anglo American War of 3240. Having been trained and genetically enginered from birth to be a soldier, he found that this discovery caused him to do something that no other soldier had done in the last 700 Years. He had gone awol. He went to the american institute of science and used the only working time machine to teleport back to the 21st century where he hoped to find a peaceful life and discover was he really human. But the call of duty was too great and he found that he had impacted his own society far more than he could have thought when he left.
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