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  • in reply to: The Gallery #7437

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    Name: Hector Montoya A.K.A Turo
    Affiliation: Villain
    Abilities: Superhuman strenght, Healing ability, fast for his size, and trained reflexs due to his time in the ring
    Info:Once seven time WSW(World Smackdown Wrestling) Champoin, Hector Montoya was known across the world as the greatest wrestler of all time Turo. Turo was known for two things, one his superb ring ability and two his mask which had a pair of horns on it. He was on top of the world, none had the strenght or the ability to beat him.This was until he was found using steroids to win his matchs. As a result Hector was stripped of his titles and fired from his job. He signed up for an expermental drug in an act of weakness and desperation. The drug made him stronger, and gave him an advance healing ability. He now uses his powers to continue what he belives will be his great come back, in reality its a non-stop crime spree until a hero can stop him. He now wears a huge armored suit and with horns on his helmet to remind everyone that he is “the Bull ” Turo
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    in reply to: Super powers. #7434

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    fair point

    in reply to: The Gallery #7013

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    Name: The Alchemist
    Affiliation: The Order of magic
    Info: Known to have lived for thousands of years and to possese great power due to the philosophers stone engraved in his chest.
    story: Enter the mystic
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    in reply to: The Gallery #7012

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    Western Alchemist
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    in reply to: The Gallery #7011

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    Armored Alchemist
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    in reply to: The Gallery #7010

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    Modern Alchemist
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    in reply to: The Gallery #7009

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    Alchemist And Humoncolous
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    in reply to: Writing Help #6943

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    Depending on the story I usually swap perspectives from Hero to Hero, Hero to Villain, etc. If I’m writing from the hero perspective and he/she is using their alter ego then I usually keep the alter ego name e.g. ‘“I can’t believe the cops weren’t there sooner” said Baxter as he looked out the window.’
    However as soon as the mask is on I refer to him in their Hero title as everyone else will. The fact that heroes do refer to themselves as their Titles even when they are in their alter egos is present in some animated series. In Batman beyond Bruce says to Terry that he knew he wasn’t going crazy because the voice that spoke to him (Later revealed to be Shriek) called him Bruce. Terry questions why was that strange to which Bruce responds I don’t call myself Bruce. This hints at, heavily, that Bruce refers to himself as Batman.
    So in Super hero stories I keep in mind that the hero is who they really are and the alter ego is the facade they put on to the world. So while writing speaking parts for heroes I use their Hero names instead of their birth names.
    Everyone above me has just as good a point as I do. Good job fellas and good luck on your story.

    in reply to: The Gallery #6676

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    Name: Bastian De Monte
    Affiliation: The S.T.A.R.S, French Armed Forces
    Abilities: Expert marksmen, sight implant to allow eye to see through any material,
    Story: S.T.A.R.S
    Info: Bastian De Monte was born in Paris, France, to police officer and teacher. As a boy he was bullied and teased due to his small stature and would often come home with bruises. His life was changed the day he was brought hunting by his grandfather. It was early morning and they had a deer in sight. His grandfather said “Be your prey. Don’t choke the gun cradle it. Treat it as a part of your body”. The deer was aware of their presence and began to run. Bastian lifted his rifle and slowly took in breaths. Watching the beast run and ignoring his grandfather’s orders to shoot, he waited for the deer to be nearly out of sight and fired. The deer fell to the ground in the distance. As years went one Bastian went hunting more and more and even started training with guns under his father’s watchful eye. He entered the French armed forces at the age of 21 and became the top sniper in the country. One day as Bastian was resting in his home, he was greeted with the appearance of a strange English man with an eye patch. He was offering Bastian a job and a surgery that would make Bastian an even better marksmen. Bastian gratefully accepted this offer and became the marksmen of the Secret group called the S.T.A.R.S
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    in reply to: Cold As Ice #6574

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    As she stepped closer to Tech and his mysterious companion, she felt a sudden uneasy feeling come over her. As if taking any further steps would result in some sort of disaster. Tech didn’t seem the type of person to ever smile. He always acted so anti-social, staring at his computer screen for hours and never moving even to get a glass of water. She had only known him for less than a day, but from the moment she saw him sit in front of the screen she knew he wasn’t the social type. She came to the conclusion the fact he was smiling to this stranger meant that they either knew each other very well, or he had said something that Tech had found so idiotic it was amusing. Ice had known people like Tech her whole life, Intellectuals who had little time for people who didn’t have time for those of lesser intelligence than their own. They didn’t like society as it was and kept to themselves and on occasions decided to come down from their clouds for a moment and mingle with the common folk. Ice was surprised to see Raven wasn’t around to ridicule her on the job she did that day. She knew he would compare her fluke to his triumph when he finally did show his face, so she enjoyed the calm before the tool either woke up or came home. She stretched her arms out and smiled as she walked towards her room.
    “Where are you going?”She heard a voice from behind her ask.
    Tech’s friend has asked her and began walking towards her. His interest in Ice made her feel a little awkward. He was talking about her as if she was a toy, or something.
    “So is this the new one Tech?” He said in a surprised yet questioning tone.
    Tech didn’t answer. Ice could feel the man’s gaze go up and down her body, and it made her uncomfortable.
    “Let me look at you.” he said staring at her in a way that made he feel like a lab rat.
    “Ok I am officially weirded the Hell out. Tech whose the Geek that’s checking my ass out and is about to get a broken nose?” Ice said to Tech.
    “That is Jerry Robinson, He’s my tech guy and occasionally Techs support.” A voice from the shadows said as a beautiful woman stepped out.
    “I’m Fox, pleasure to meet you” She said as she stepped closer to Ice.
    “I’m Ice. And it’s great to see Tech isn’t only interested in male heroes.” Ice said as she looked the woman up and down.
    “Oh honey I’m no hero. I’m a thief.” She said in a calm manner.
    “The hero game is kinda a rare thing for me to be involved in. But I just can’t say no when Tech-y Pie, over there, needs my or Jerry’s help with something. It’s so cute to hear him say please” She said in a mocking manner towards Tech.
    “Techy Pie?” Ice said smiling towards the already at work Tech.
    “I don’t want the nickname…I didn’t ask for it…and I won’t respond to it” Tech said as cold as ever.
    Ice suddenly felt relaxed around this woman, it was nice not being the only woman in the base and she was some eye candy ice could stare at while Tech talked.
    “Any other visitors I should know about?” Ice said to Tech.
    “A few more should be arriving sometime later, but don’t expect the best of the best yet.” Tech said to Ice as he started typing on to his screen.
    “While the boys are playing their games why don’t we get to know one another hmm?” She said as she walked towards the empty quarters and gestured towards Ice to follow.

    Baxter Hall drove down the street fast as his car could take him. His partner messed up, if he didn’t act like such a hot shot he wouldn’t have gotten that slug in his brain now would he? It was a simple order. Don’t let him out of your sight. But nooooooooo, he had to go commando on the clerk’s ass. That was why he was dead and Baxter was still alive with all the money. It worked out for the best. Baxter now had enough money to get his fix for months and none could stop him. It was as if Santa Clause had come early and decided to give it all to him. All of a sudden he lost control of his car and hit the lamppost. He shouted as he stepped out of the car. He saw the rubber on the wheels had been melted at the front and ripped apart at the back. Two men dropped down in front of him and started walking towards him. He quickly drew his gun and fired, it hit one of them and they flew back to the ground. The other one, however, did not slow done or speed up his advance. The death of his friend apparently did not faze him what so ever. Baxter was just about ready to shoot the advancing survivor when he saw the other one get up. He got up as if he’d just been tripped by his friend. Before he had time to think about it, he was thrown across the street by one of the strangers.
    “What the Hell are you sons of Bi-*LACK*” his sentence was soon cut short by the boot planted on his Bulbous stomach.
    “Omega is it really necessary to cut him off?” One of the men said to the one whose boot had found a new home in Baxter’s stomach.
    “Why not? He’s a damn criminal. He doesn’t deserve the right to speak. In fact I could break his jaw if I wanted to.” The man said as it finally hit Baxter who these men were.
    “ALPHA AND OMEGA!” Baxter said trying to lift Omegas Foot off him.
    “Oh he knows our names. Cute.” Omega said as he punched Baxter in the face.
    Baxter’s last thought was how much that fist flying towards his face would hurt.

    in reply to: The Gallery #6570

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    Character Contest 93
    Name: The Great Question
    Affiliation: Hero/ Monk
    Abilities: Master of Zen, can sense someone’s chi and decide on their intentions, master of several forms of martial arts, Known to have lived for a millennia.
    Info: Living, in secret, at the Dragon Temple in the hazardous Himalaya Mountains, the great question is known throughout the spiritual world as a man of great knowledge and skill. He is a legend to the modern world as a man who has lived for hundreds of years and trained hundreds of great warriors of legend. He only trains those who are powerful in both will and strength, and will only use his teachings in defence of the innocent.

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    in reply to: The Gallery #6569

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    Character Contest 93
    Name: The Grasshopper
    Affiliation: Thief, Villain
    Abilities: Advanced leaping technology in boots that allow him to jump long distances,
    Info: Charlie Hooper was an average technician when he perfected a way to leap tall buildings. Finding that his infesters didn’t appreciate his work, he went into despair. After a week he was fired from his job. He then used his technology as a thief and slowly became known throughout the city as The Grasshopper due to the way he leapt great distances.

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    in reply to: The Gallery #6568

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    Character Contest 93
    Name: The Fox
    Affiliation: Theif/Anti-Hero
    Abilities: Enhanced reflexs,Night vision goggles, collection of gadgets that she uses during hystes
    Info:The Fox is a world famous theif known for her amazing hiests and random acts of heroism. She can break any lock, infiltrate any building and steal any item. She is wanted for theft all over the world.
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    in reply to: The Gallery #6567

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    Character Contest 93
    Name: Fly Man
    Affiliation: Hero
    Abilities: Enhanced Reflexs, able to leap higher than humanly possible, enhanced strength,Mask eye peaces can detect vapours,body heat,sonar, and can zoom in on targets, uses a grapling hook to get from areas he cant jump.
    Info: A former marine that was discharged for not following an order that could have gotten his men killed. After he was discharged he decided he would work as a secuirty gaurd at some chemical plant. One night he heard a noise while patroling the factory floor, he decided he would cheack it out. Finding a bunch of drug addicts messing with the chemicals, he ordered them to stop. In desperation they began throwing chemicals at him. To this day he doesnt know if it was one chemical or all of them that triggered his powers, but he doesnt care. At that moment he blacked out and woke up in the hospital. His powers would slowly come to surface over his peroid of sick leave.
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    in reply to: The Gallery #6566

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    Character Contest 93
    Name: Four Comrades
    Affiliation: Hero;s
    Abilities:Lucas- Skilled at Boxing , enhanced stamina
    David- Gifted negotiator and interragator, Strategic mind, photo genic memory
    Billy- Master of disguise and voice manipulation(enhanced with the use of face puty and a voice manipulator)
    Baxter- High Intellect, Self manufacured power suit, Born leader.
    Info:Each member has his own set of skills and abilities. As a result they fight crime togeter in order to find out the reason they have such similar backgrounds and the same tregedy claimed all their loved ones.
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