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Just had an idea of revamping some of my old heros and villains.Maybe give them a more awsome suit better story or just change them a little for the better. It just came to me as i was looking over some of my old work and thought some of them could be better. The first idea that came to mind was Fox so i upgraded her just now. I hope you all agree that the new fox is better than the old one.
Name: Titan
Affiliation: Villain
Abilities: Ability to absorb any form of energy and fire it in a beam towards his opponent from his hands, eyes, or chest piece, can increase strength and mass by absorbing energy into system, can create a repulsion field around himself
Info: Thomas Duke was the son of a scientist who constantly experimented on him. His mother died giving birth to his sister who then died due to an accident in his father’s lab. Thomas always hated his father for his agonising experiments and lack of empathy. One day his father tried to sell a weapon he was designing for the government and wanted to test it in front of the general. Thomas watched from the house as his father exploded after turning the weapon on. Thomas spent the rest of his teen years as a delinquent and was arrested numerous times. However, over the years Thomas had got into trouble with the wrong people and they were now after him. Finding the chest piece he decided he would kill himself when they arrived so as to give them a show. When the door was broke down he turned it on, sending a huge yellow beam from his chest towards the intruders. Finding that his father died due to an overcharge in the battery cells, Thomas found that he could use this weapon to become a powerful crime lord. He fashioned a suit so as to harness the weapons full potential while keeping him safe.
Name: Freezing Point
Affiliation: Villain
Abilities: Ability to control ice and is protected by a suit of armour that amplifies his abilities
Appearance: Appears in my story COLD AS ICE
Info: Not much is known about Freezing points past and he rarely talks about his previous life. What is known about him is that he believes that he is forever warm and the only way to cool down is by freezing people. He is a dangerous adversary to fight as he is unpredictable and possesses both a strong offense and defence due to his powers and armour.
Character Contest 99
Name: Firefly
Affiliation: Hero
Abilities: Night Vision, Thermal Vision, energy blasts from the eyes in the helmet of the armour, flight
Info: Scientists were working on a government project, when before it was completed the item was stolen. The codenamed Project Firefly was a metal suit of armour for soldiers that would let them fly into enemy territories and take out their bases. Not yet activated, it would be worth millions on the black market. The thieves got into a car accident and the armour was lost to the world. This was until the day a college student named Marcus Brown found the suitcase. When he put it on he found it gave him great abilities and decided to use them to become a hero under the name on the case of the suit. He became FIREFLY.
Character Contest 99
Name: Desert Eagle
Affiliation: Villain
Abilities: Flight, Expert marksmen, Expert in hand to hand combat.
Info: The leader of a mercenary group, Desert Eagle got his name due to his weapon of choice and the mechanical suit he wears. His methods are brutal and he shows little to no mercy to civilians, refugees, soldiers, and his own men. A force to be reckoned with and has no real goal or motivation besides battle.
Character Contest 99
Name: The Fallen Angel
Affiliation: None
Abilities: Flight, Flaming Sword, Super strength, Ability to speak to the dead, Highly intelligent, Indestructible armour, abilities to sense demons or angels
Info: After failing to fight for God in the battle against hell, the Angel Abraham was vanquished to earth to live until he redeemed himself. His body was cursed to share both a form of an angel and demon. He was given a mortal body to reside in to hide the shame that was now his body. For thousands of years he lived on earth examining those who God created. Then as demons started coming to earth he took up his sword again and decided he would earn his way back into Paradise.
Character Contest 99
Name: Comrade Steel
Affiliation: Villain
Abilities: Flight, Super Strength, Canon on left hand
Info: Before the Cold War ended in 2005 two super soldier suits of armour were created. These Red steel and Black Titanium suits were codenamed Stalin and Khrushchev in honour of the Soviet Union’s former leaders. When the war ended the suits were locked away. That is until the day that two rogue discharged soldiers broke into the containment facility and stole them. After that day the two became Terrorists around the world fighting to bring back the Soviet Union
Ice was the last to arrive at the scene. Her comrades were busy fighting off the villains, while civilians ran in fear and panic. The civilians had their reasons to be scared. The villains that they were up against were not only intimidating but had superpowers. One was flying in around and looked like something from Greek mythology. She was flying around and fighting the Fly, who despite being a capable fighter seemed to be having trouble. She saw another one fighting Omega, who like Fly-boy, was having trouble with a guy who was teleporting around him. It took everything in her not to turn and run from this. After all this wasn’t her fight. She didn’t have any obligation to these people. But she couldn’t run. These guys needed help and there was something big happening in this city. Her train of thought was broken by Electro Man who was shouting towards her.
“Hey ICE! You got a brother?!” He said as he shot blasts of electricity towards his opponent
“No why?” Ice said as she saw Electro Mans opponent.
He was using ice powers much stronger than her own. He was standing on a pillar of ice shooting Electro man with spikes of ice. She felt fear grip her body again. She was out of her league and she knew it. These guys were on a totally different level to Ricoshay and Canon. The thought came to her that she could die here. What would happen then? Her death would be mourned by nearly none. Alice and her co-workers would show up but besides that who really cared if she lived or died? Suddenly a car came flying towards her. She dodged it by the skin of her teeth. She looked towards her attacker and felt the blood run from her pale face. He was a huge man who scorched the earth that he walked on. His body looked like it was made of volcanic rock. Then he spoke.
“I guess I’m left with the runt of the group huh?” His voice was warped and sounded like he was talking into a speaker.
Ice felt her gut twist and turn in fear as he came closer. She saw Omega on the ground bleeding from his mouth, Electro man’s legs were frozen to the ground, and Fly was lying on the ground. Seeing this she snapped out of her paralyzed state just in time to dodge his attack.
“You move fast for a weakling. Let’s see if you burn just as fast!” He said shooting a fireball at her.
Dodging, Ice stood up and took off her jacket.
“I hate fighting dumb pieces of crap like you” She said as she looked at her opponent.
“So what do they call you hot head?” She said looking her opponent over
“The Names Golem. And it’s the last name you will ever hear!” He shouted as he shot a fire ball at her for the second time.
Forming an ice shield she blocked the worst of his attack but still took some damage from the big lug. She dodged as he came running towards her. She realised the only thing that could beat this big idiot was her freezing his whole body. Jumping up on a demolished car she waited for him to turn around.
“Hey Gravel Mouth over here!!” She shouted at him.
“You’re gonna burn up real nice bitch!” he said charging towards her.
“This is gonna hurt” Ice thought as he got close to her.
She leapt up in the air over him and landed on his back. The rock burned her body and caused her to scream in pain. She was on the verge of tears as her body burned.
“The hell are you doing!!” He shouted as he tried to knock her off.
“Time to chill out Mongo!” She shouted as she froze his entire body.
His whole body was covered by ice, freezing him in place. Her ice trailing down his body cooled down her wounds a little but the pain was still there.
“YOU CANT DO TH-” his words were silenced as his head was encased in ice.
Pain taking over, she fell of his body and into unconsciousness.Omega saw Ice fall off the big guy and knew this wasn’t a good. She wasn’t moving and appeared to have been burned severely. He didn’t get to think about her condition much, because he was soon kicked in the face by the teleporting dick. Omega didn’t like to be toyed with or made a fool of, especially by a guy that used a belt buckle to teleport. This really began to piss him off and he couldn’t take this idiots babbling anymore.
“So you’re the great Omega? Damn it I was hoping for some kind of a challenge!” The ass said to Omega mocking him.
“You know I don’t know what pisses me off more. Your voice or your confidence!” Omega said sweeping his legs.
Teleporting behind Omega, he stomped on his Omegas back and started talking again.
“Oh I know you’re such the tough guy. But look how the mighty has fallen.” He said stomping on Omegas back.
“I want the last thing you hear to be the name of the man who broke your neck! My name is Warp!” He said griping Omegas Neck.
“Thanks for the info” Omega said to the tool.
Just as Omega expected it to all end a bolt of electricity shot Warps belt buckle disabling it.
“Thanks Sparky!” Omega shouted to Electro man who was now taking cover.
Warp frantically tried to activate the belt as Omega got up and walked towards him.Ripping the belt off and throwing it over the edge. Warps face, though masked, showed a sense of fear.
“Now let’s get down to business shall we?” Omega said as he began work on Warp.
Gripping his mask he punched him in the face, and then kneed him in the stomach. Omega was enjoying this too much and he knew it, but he didn’t care. He beat down Warp and let the cocky idiot fall to the ground.Now that Omega was safe Electro man had to worry about the animal he was facing.
“This City belongs to Freezing Point!!” Freezing point said as Electro man crouched behind a wrecked car.
It wasn’t easy but Electro man had to find a way to take this guy down. It would be so much easier if he could get him off that huge ice pillar. He now had a spike in his shoulder and was pinned down behind a busted car. Freezing Point was freezing everything in sight to try to flush him out.
“Come out Lightning man! Come out and face me!!” His mask making his voice sound intimidating but hard to pick up.
A thought quickly came to Electro mans mind. The Telephone wires could give a big enough charge to take Freezing point out. As he gripped the wound Omega came to his side.
“The hell are you doing Omega?” Electro man said as blood poured down his body.
“Saving Ice’s and your ass!” Omega said looking at Freezing point.
“I don’t need your help!” As Electro man said this The Fly hit the ground after being dropped from the sky.
“Holy Sh-” Omega was interrupted by vicious sonic scream by the flying bird woman.
Omega dashed over and picked up the Fly. Omega came back and laid the injured hero down. Then the man sat up and looked at the men surrounding him.
“I feel like a big Ole bag of crap!” The Fly said in a thick southern accent.
“Hey you got the easy one. I’ve been pinned down here bleeding out!” Electro man said to the Fly.
“Then let’s swap dancing partners?” The Fly said.
Electro man smiled and nodded in agreement. Flying up to the bird lady Electro man smiled as he looked her over.
“See something you like shock jock? Names Harpy. Where’s the bug?” Harpy said looking at Electro man.
“I thought you might want a little change in partners!” He said blasting electricity at Harpy.
Dodging it she flew towards him with her claws ready for him. As she hit him he shot her with electricity and sent her screaming and hurdling towards the ground.Fly man leapt towards Freezing Point and punched him off the pillar. As he fell the Fly leapt down and planted his feet into the stomach of Freezing Point. Freezing Points armour shattered when they both hit the ground and their mission was done.
“Anyone dead?” The Fly shouted towards his teammates.
“No I don’t think so!” Omega said as he limped towards the Fly.
“Let’s get back to base before we end that way” Electro man said to his team mates.
“I feel like hell!” Ice said lifting her body off the ground.
She had done it. She was now officially a super hero. And she felt like crap. She almost died taking down that big idiot and saved god knows how many people. Sure her body was weak but her will was strong and she was sure that her burns would heal over time. Ice was now a Hero and for some reason she hoped the other team would be as successful as she was.
Character Contest 98
Name: Lightning Girl
Affiliation: Hero
Abilities: Flight, Ability to channel electricity, super strength
Info: Misty Kane was a normal high school student living her normal life in the big city. She wasn’t the most popular girl because of her average looks. She was one of the many people in the city who was affected by the “shock rock” as people called it. One day as a meteorite fell from the sky during a lightning storm it was struck by lightning and blew into hundreds of pieces. Each piece flew across the city causing powers to manifest in anyone who was exposed to their radiation. Misty was the first to be affected as the rock hit her while she was on her bike and threw her to the ground. Getting up feeling like crap she continued home. Her body changed that night becoming stronger and powerful. She discovered her powers after she nearly electrocuted her cat to death. She found her purpose and that was to be a hero.
Character Contest 98
Name: Radior
Affiliation: Hero
Abilities: Super strength, Electro/Magnetic powers, flight, and ability to read someone’s mind
Info: Jack Evans was a scientist who worked with radioactive and electric equipment. One night he was brutally attacked in his lab and was beaten to an inch of his life. The thugs hooked up all of his machinery together to one EMP bomb. As the bomb detonated all his equipment shot a blast towards his body and eradiated him while electrocuting his body. He ran from the building while screaming in pain. As he entered his home he collapsed on the floor. The days he took to heal his injuries were ones of discoveries. He found that he had gained superpowers and would stop at nothing to bring justice to his city
