World of Resurgence

[TCoS]

Hey everyone, I found HM about half a year ago and I’ve been tinkering with it ever since. However, I actually have a serious use for it now.; a friend and I are collaborating on a story with superheroes/villains in it, and so I’ve made a handful of my characters on here. Sadly, I haven’t gotten my main villain where I want him, so I’ll post him when I’m done.

First off here’s Alexander Sanderson, also known as Scarecrow, who’s power is umbrakineses (control of dark energy). I’d rather not delve into anyone’s backstory until the first chapter is out.

Right along with Scarecrow is Shade – real name Jessica Park – who’s ability is telekineses (though unlike Scarecrow, who’s a mutant, her powers are artificial).

And last but not least is Crash, the longest tenured superhero in Atlanta (where the story takes place). Unlike the former two, his identity is public (Gary Johnson), but he really doesn’t care.

Thoughts? Comments? Things I could change?

[JR19759]

Nice start.
Please make sure you read the forum rules.

As for suggestions, try putting a resized black circle behind the first guys head, so it makes it look like the hood has a back. Also you’ve got some weird layering going on there, the energy should probably be at the front and the gun should be in front of the belt item. Apart from that I can’t see anything too glaringly obvious that needs addressing. It’s just a case of experimenting until you’re happy. I’m sure some other people might pick up on things I’ve missed, but not bad overall.

[TCoS]

@JR19759 said:

Nice start.
Please make sure you read the forum rules.

As for suggestions, try putting a resized black circle behind the first guys head, so it makes it look like the hood has a back. Also you’ve got some weird layering going on there, the energy should probably be at the front and the gun should be in front of the belt item. Apart from that I can’t see anything too glaringly obvious that needs addressing. It’s just a case of experimenting until you’re happy. I’m sure some other people might pick up on things I’ve missed, but not bad overall.

Sounds good, but uh, I lost the data for him. The other two I’ve still got, but I had to fetch that pic from another forum :I

I guess I’ll get around to reconstructing him later.

Thanks for the post in any case.

[The Atomic Punk]

Willkommen, TCoS!

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