Which heros story would you like to hear next?

[DC-Lover]

For those of you who have read some of my stories in the superheros section I have finished writing about the mystic for the time being.(For anyone whos interested in it heres the link- http://www.heromachine.com/forum/super-hero-fiction/enter-the-mystic/ )
But I have other heros that i wish to write about some probubly better suited for Sci-Fi Section, some sticking to the hero section. I am currently doing the story “Cold as Ice” which is much darker than my story Enter the mystic, however so i can keep on my toes i like to do at least two seperate stories a week on my characters. So I want to ask everyone in the Heromachine commuinity which of these heros would they like to see next?

“Justice for all? “
A Hero that has everything taken from him, convicted of crimes he didnt commit and imprisioned behind bars. His story centers around his time in prision and what he does when he gets out. He finds out his enemies have made it big as crime lords to each section of the city and the police are in their pockets. His face is forgotten after being in hiding for a year plotting a way to take back this city and get revenge for what had happended to him. In a nutshell what happens when someone who protects, who is place so high on the podium, is brought down to rock bottom for no reason and how he deals with it. I had thought of this story for some time and after reading some crime novels and things like that, i wondered how someone who stood for justice would deal with this situation.

“The S.T.A.R.S(Superpowered-Team-Against-Rougue-Superhumans)”
About a group of soldiers who have been either sceintifically enhanced or granted superhuman abilitys through other means. They are a team of men whos mission is to stop terrorist acts around the world. Each member is from a different country and each have Unique abilities. There are Five active members of the stars excluding their commanding officer. This idea came to me slowly.
Each character was originally an idea for a seperate hero but i could never get the feel that they would survive on their own. So i put them all in a team togeter.

“Heros of Our Time”
A story about heros becoming a thing of the past. A future where the state is run by the milatary and the police are the higest ranking officails of any area. While all the greatest hero’s of the time are now old men, the people no longer have symbols that give them hope. The remaining member’s of the superhero Organisation called The Guild Of Justice decide its time to go rogue and bring down the facist government and bring back rights to the people, but do they still have enough fight in them to save the day like the use to. I belive it has potential.
Any feedback on the stories or questions will be answered.

[DC-Lover]

Adding to the stories that I have not done from the list above I had a few ideas concerning other stories as I come closer to putting one of my stories on break. I must say I was surprised with the popularity of both “Heroes of our Time” And “Cold as Ice” and hope to continue satisfying you all with my writings. While I will change some titles of the former I freely ask anyone to give me criticism about the suggested stories or the ones I am doing currently. Here’s the new list:

1. Version 1.0 = A story in which a scientist plants his brain in an experimental robot made for the government. He is now stalked by the government agents while trying to live a normal life.

2. The Devil Within= A rich millionaire discovers he has a split personality. One his normal self and the other a vigilante by the name of Mr. Satan. Our hero wishes to find out why he has acquired the personality of Mr. Satan and how he can cure himself of it before Mr. Satan gets into a fight he cannot win.

3. 1925= A Multi-story about the first vigilantes of the world and how they effected the countries or states they protected.

4. The Last Laugh = A story cantered around a joker-like hero. A hero called the clown whose mind is almost shattered by trauma he has suffered. His views on right and wrong are hazed by his own mental instability.

5. The Storm Caller = A story cantering around my first ever hero idea Blitz. With numerous Lightning powers he patrols the city as both a superhero and an officer of the law. He is out to rid the city of crime for his dead parents and for the people of the city.

6. S.T.A.R.S (Special –Taskforce- Against- Rogue- Super beings) = about a group of soldiers who have been either scientifically enhanced or granted superhuman abilities through other means. They are a team of men whose mission is to stop terrorist acts around the world. Each member is from a different country and each has unique abilities. There are five active members of the stars excluding their commanding officer. This idea came to me slowly.
Each character was originally an idea for a separate hero but I could never get the feel that they would survive on their own. So I put them all in a team together.

7. Justice for all? =A Hero that has everything taken from him, convicted of crimes he didn’t commit and imprisoned behind bars. His story centres on his time in prison and what he does when he gets out. He finds out his enemies have made it big as crime lords to each section of the city and the police are in their pockets. His face is forgotten after being in hiding for a year plotting a way to take back this city and get revenge for what had happened to him. In a nutshell what happens when someone who protects, who is place so high on the podium, is brought down to rock bottom for no reason and how he deals with it? I had thought of this story for some time and after reading some crime novels and things like that, I wondered how someone who stood for justice would deal with this situation.

I hope to gain some feedback about what story people would like to see next

[DC-Lover]

Thought that I should add some short peice of the story into the choices.
1. Version 1.0 = A story in which a scientist plants his brain in an experimental robot made for the government. He is now stalked by the government agents while trying to live a normal life.
“I woke up and surveyed the cold white coloured room. I thought it was all a dream, like something I had dreamt up in some sort of masochistic lesson not to play God. I was just fooling myself.My life as I knew it was over and that was something I had to accept. This realisation came to me when i raised my right hand and the pink soft skin that once covered it was replaced by cold blue steel.”

2. The Golden Age= A Multi-story about the vigilantes of the world during the world war and how they effected the countries or states they protected.

3. The Last Laugh = A story cantered around a joker-like hero. A hero called the clown whose mind is almost shattered by trauma he has suffered. His views on right and wrong are hazed by his own mental instability.
“He looked into the mirror and thought of what they did. They forced him to laugh as they killed his family in front of them. They wanted him to laugh at their deaths as they beat him to an inch of his life and threw him off the pier. He punched the mirror and it shattered around his fist. Blood ran down his fist like a river and he saw the badge in the cracked glass. They were going to regret letting him live.”

4. The Storm Caller = A story cantering around my first ever hero idea Blitz. With numerous Lightning powers he patrols the city as both a superhero and an officer of the law. He is out to rid the city of crime for his dead parents and for the people of the city.

5. S.T.A.R.S (Special –Taskforce- Against- Rogue- Super beings) = about a group of soldiers who have been either scientifically enhanced or granted superhuman abilities through other means. They are a team of men whose mission is to stop terrorist acts around the world. Each member is from a different country and each has unique abilities. There are five active members of the stars excluding their commanding officer. This idea came to me slowly.
Each character was originally an idea for a separate hero but I could never get the feel that they would survive on their own. So I put them all in a team together.
“The old Englishman lifts the young American soldier off the ground and flipped him over his shoulder. The rest of the team watched in shock completely unaware of Major Quartermain’s abilities in hand to hand combat.
‘Still think you can take me on boy?’ The major said smiling down at Inferno
Helping the young soldier up the Major turned to the group and smiled. With a pleasent tone in his voice he said “Welcome to the STAR unit gentlemen. “

6. Justice for all? =A Hero that has everything taken from him, convicted of crimes he didn’t commit and imprisoned behind bars. His story centres on his time in prison and what he does when he gets out. He finds out his enemies have made it big as crime lords to each section of the city and the police are in their pockets. His face is forgotten after being in hiding for a year plotting a way to take back this city and get revenge for what had happened to him. In a nutshell what happens when someone who protects, who is place so high on the podium, is brought down to rock bottom for no reason and how he deals with it? I had thought of this story for some time and after reading some crime novels and things like that, I wondered how someone who stood for justice would deal with this situation.

[DC-Lover]

While I have been busy with exams and essays I have had a few ideas for new stories to do in my spare time. Now one that kept on my mind was a story based on the world of the Video game Fallout. It would be just some ideas of things i think are happening in the post war wasteland and a character that i came up with a long time ago.
It would center around a characters journey throughout the wastelands and be written in a mixture of narrative and Journal form similar so he would be narrating his travels but he may not be in the same place as he was in the last update(Of course this is just the first few ideas)
What he would run into would be:
1. A new Form of KKK that hunTs down ghouls instead of Afrcan Americans. Lets face it racism will be around for a long time and its already touched upon in the game. You always meet people in the game that show some form of hatred towards ghouls, so there has to be a radical group in the Wasteland somewhere that hates ghouls as much as the NCR hate the Legion
2. A Cult led by a man who calls himself the Savior . Something that appears to be even more frequent in these games is the topic of religion or a cult, so why hasnt anyone taken it one step further and made a cult of some kind. Considering the mentality of people and how they would love something to follow it is an interesting topic to discuss in the fallout universe.
3. Mexican Cartel still running and the Border Patrol. A while ago i was playing a mod on New Vegas that featured ghoulified soldiers from Area 51. Upon closer inspection of the backstory of the mod I found that the soldiers were attacking me out of their sense of duty to protect the base. So then the idea of the border patrol came to me. Imagine Ghoulified individuals leading a bunch of people to stop or kill individuals coming over the border. As for the Cartel I doubt being ghoulified or a nuclear fallout would stop them from running Jet or Psycho or perhaps a new drug across the border
4. NYC, Chicago, and Texas. These are random but interesting cities that would have been affect by the Nuclear fallout.

Some other ideas are floating about but not really expanded upon. I would really like some feedback if you could give it and if you have any thoughts or questions say so. For the record this may not even be written Unless im sure its a good idea.

[DC-Lover]

The Following is Happening in regards to my stories:
1.Cold as Ice will be comeing to an end after a few more chapters.
2.The Devil Within is currently on a break and will resume shortly after Cold as Ice ends.
3.Heroes of Our Time will be updated and continued
4. A new story will be created dealing with a Hero Called Hotspot. It will take a different direction than that of my usual stories, because as those who have read my stories know I like to take things from a different approach (retired heros with real life problems brought back into the game, Lesbian part time superhero dragged into the full time job, Man being controlled by another personality or demon to do good even though he doesnt want to..Etc etc)

[DC-Lover]

As it turns out my hopes for the Hotspot story has hit a rut and therefore(untill I settle on a good storyline) I wont be handling him just yet. So I think for now whats taking place is the first three options from above until Heros Of our time finishs as that is not intended to be as long as some of my other stories.
Now I do have a request.
Check out the story The Atomic Punk and I have collaborated on here : http://www.heromachine.com/forum/super-hero-fiction/osez-marchez-avec-lobscurite-dare-to-walk-with-darkness/

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