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It was a pleasure, do you want the text? Back to noir.
Donnie Lonegan is a troll spellfighter who works as an enforcer. He can charge his arm with mana, resulting in explosive punches or energy blasts.
That would be great! If that’s okay with you I’d love to present him on my comic-website (sadly still under construction) along with my own interpretion that was highly inspired by your redesign and style:
That’s awesome! And here is the text you asked for.
/daren
Sun Jun 16 10:57:03 GMT-0500 2013
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And here is the hitman Costello who is based upon the lead in Le Samourai. He is precise and accurate in his shooting and his killing. He also follows a strict code of honor.
After seeing AMS’s redesign of my Alpha, I redesigned my own character as I did before with JR’s redesign. I present Alpha reedited, with a more permanent look.
And Noir is back.
“J Robert Benjamin is the most powerful man in town. Besides owning half a dozen clubs like the Twin Ravens, he also owns this city, half the police force is taking something from him and most of the mayor’s staff are on his payroll. Add onto that every thug, low life, and hoodlum that works for him, and you have a modern day king. He rules fairly, everybody gets their take and those that work with him live decently enough. Those that work against him aren’t so lucky. They disappear, as if they were swallowed up by the earth. Most probably were, as Mr. Benjamin doubles as the foremost expert on Earth Magic.I’ve been at odds with him before, but I always end up alive in the end. The trick with dealing with powerful men is to always have something they need, or some dirt and I generally have both.
“
Thanks!
“Dr. Crane is one cold bastard. He’s Benjamin’s right hand, next to Tommy as his left. Tommy’s a vicious animal and Crane is not what you’d call Elf. He’s a machine, emotionless and logical. Tommy enjoys inflicting pain, cackling as he does it with a monstrous glint in his eye. Crane’s eyes are flat and a smile doesn’t breach his lips. He sees pain as an oddity, something he can study to aid him in his tasks. Tommy inflicts pain without a reason, when Crane causes it, it always is for something, something Benjamin needs.Crane’s skills as a doctor make him perfect for his line of work. He can hurt just as he can heal. He uses a spell surgeons use, they stick their hands in and grab and repair while inside, their hands phantomlike. The good doctor, though, makes his hands semisolid, inflicting immense pain. Then the good doctor removes all trace of his work. In short terms, if he asks a question, you better answer it.“
Thanks and here is Preacher, both with and without background. He is based upon Reverend Harry Powell from Night of the Hunter, a fantastic movie with a very memorable Mitchum.
Preacher is a force of nature, killing those he views as sinners brutally, strangling or beating them with his bare hands. While his hands are around your throat, he quotes scripture, making him seem the embodiment of God’s wrath. He is not above being pointed towards a victim, but those hiring him have to wary, as Preacher has been known to turn on his employers, especially if they sin in front of him.
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