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Just had an idea of revamping some of my old heros and villains.Maybe give them a more awsome suit better story or just change them a little for the better. It just came to me as i was looking over some of my old work and thought some of them could be better. The first idea that came to mind was Fox so i upgraded her just now. I hope you all agree that the new fox is better than the old one.
Name: 11
Affiliation: Mercenary
Abilities: Strenght, expert swordsmen, titanium body
Story: The Forgotten Swordsmen
Info: 11 is a mercenary shrouded in mystery. Whether he is man or machine is to anyone’s guess. His memory won’t even tell him if he is a man or not. He gets faint memories now and then that allow him to see some of his past.
Name: Sin
Affiliation: Anti hero
Abilities: Expert at archery, hand to hand combat, art of deception, and illusion.
Info: Sin is known throughout his city as a man willing to track down and take care of those who hurt people leaving the word sinner carved into them. He carries a bladed disc, a sai, small throw able blades and a crossbow attached to his wrist. He is feared in the criminal underworld as a ghost or a demon due to his choice of attire.
“Revamped design of my old character”
Name: The Clown
Affiliation: Anti hero
Abilities: Extreme Nerve damage allows him to withstand pain that would normally knock any normal sane human being out.
Info: Bradley Campbell worked as a cop in the big city and was an honest one to booth. Born and raised to catholic parents he was always told if he lived a good life good things would happen to him and that evil would always be punished. He married a beautiful woman and had a son, whom he would often entertain with magic tricks. The police department was having trouble with the mob and as a result the mob needed to send a message. One night when he returned home Brad was assaulted and knocked unconscious by mafia hit men. When he woke up he saw that they were holding a canister of something and had his family tied up. He was then forced to inhale what was in the canister and started laughing. Every time he was forced to take breaths of the gas resulting in more and more gas being pumped into his system. He laughed as his family were brutally tortured and killed in front of his own eyes. He was then brutally beaten and thrown off the peer believed to be dead. Washing up on shore he suffered a nervous breakdown when he woke up asking why he had to suffer and why he couldn’t feel anything. His body had suffered nerve damage as a result of the gas, and all he could think of was how he laughed. He took up a variety of different weapons (including a pistol, a bat and a knife) and found a creepy smiling badge in the sand. He seeks justice but has a cracked perception about what is right and wrong?
Revamped design of my old character”
Name: Mr. Satan
Affiliation: Hero
Abilities: Mr. Satan cannot feel pain inflicted on to his body, he still bleeds but unless it’s noticeable he won’t be aware of it, Dudley however feels the pain from the wounds the next time he is in control,
Info: Dudley Bradshaw is your typical spoilt rotten playboy millionaire. Dudley lives a life of freedom doing whatever he wants whenever he wants without worry of any consequences. He has an on again off again relationship with the beautiful Cassandra Hoffkins, whom he describes as the perfect woman. However, Dudley has a secret that he cannot share with anyone, a secret that puts his life at stake every chance it can. For you see Dudley suffers from Multiple personality disorder and his other side is the vigilante Mr. Satan! Mr. Satan is a foul mouthed, intelligent, reckless, unpredictable and dangerous individual that is willing to put himself at risk in order to make the city a better place. Mr. Satan has no respect for Dudley and doesn’t care about Dudley’s opinion on any subject. The only way the two are able to meet and converse is through a broken black framed mirror in the basement of Dudley’s house.
Name: Dusk Baron
Affiliation: Villain
Abilities: Absorbs solar energy from the setting sun to use in a variety of different ways
Info: Unknown
Name: The Four Horsemen (Conquest, Death, Famine and War)
Affiliation: Villains
Info: Conquest- Unknown and never seen leader of the Horsemen. His abilities are Unknown but he is feared by his
subordinatesDeath-Known to be an unstoppable killing machine and Leaves the corpses of his victims hanging from a Noose as his
calling card. Almost never seen by survivors. Other Abilities unknownFamine- A quiet almost shadow like Killer. Brutal with his tactics often leaves a disgusting looking body either poisoned or
Carved up.War- The most brutal of all the Horsemen. He is the dog of the Four. He only follows orders and is an unstoppable killing
machine. His tactics vary from cutting his targets to pieces, to shooting them so much there is little left to recognise
the target. He is only used for a job that requires someone dead and he can kill as many as he wishes.
Name: Mr. Abelle (first name unknown)
Affiliation: Unknown (Possible mafia connection)
Traits: Sadistic personality that despite his vocal objection to using violence seems to enjoy inflicting pain, Carries a cane despite showing no sign of disability, the cane itself has a skull positioned on the top of it and sharp bottom to it, a skilled fighter, skilled manipulator and negotiator, and intelligent
Info: A dangerous individual who follows his own set of morals. Other members of the organisation he works for seem to be as afraid of him as the people he is sent to deal with. His actions are impulsive yet effective at times still always staying at least five steps ahead of his opponent. The only question is can he be stopped? (Appears in the Devil Within)
Name:Lady Lumenation
Affiliation: Heroine
Abilities:Abilitie to emit high frequencys of light from her body.
Name: Agent Jackson
Affiliation:Member of the S.T.A.R.(Secret. Tactical. Adavanced. Reacon)
Traits: Milatary trained soldeir and right hand of Major Qautermain
Name: Arsenal
Affiliation: Member of the S.T.A.R. unit
Traits: Nicknamed the Blind Marksmen, Blind without his mask on, Expert marksmen, holds several weapons on his body some of which are visible.
Info: Ivan Zolnerowich was born a bastard son in Moscow Russia. An intelligent child at a young age he started taking up odd jobs to keep his mind from getting bored and practiced different forms of combat. Of all his activities archery and shooting were his best. He rarely missed a shot. On his 21st birthday he suffered a terrible accident that left him blind, but his other senses had increased tenfold. He was then recruited into a secret organisation and given a mask that not only allowed him to see again but allowed him to see far better than he ever could.
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