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June 25, 2013 at 9:40 pm #26653
WMDBASSPLAYERParticipantIn that case, here’s something fresh, (actually , I did this a while ago). I mean fresh, as in no story. You can use either one. BTW, I know about the clouds, but I lost the save. Maybe you can use that.
June 26, 2013 at 11:51 am #26673
The Atomic PunkParticipantI’ll get to both this weekend. With Maidenhead, more concerned about repeating your story. I take snippets and references from all over the place. It’s part of my method. Speaking of which… I have King Harvest stuck in my head now…
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We get it on most every night
When that moon is big and bright
It’s a supernatural delight
Everybody’s dancing in the moonlight
o/~June 26, 2013 at 3:00 pm #26687
WMDBASSPLAYERParticipantCool! In the meantime maybe I can put together a few more pics of Amy and One Arm in different poses and maybe some costume variations. And that is a great song to have in your head!
June 27, 2013 at 1:22 am #26709
WMDBASSPLAYERParticipantI don’t want to clog this thread with experimental pieces, so Atomic, check my Heros, All thread for an updated Amy Atom you might want to use later. I’ll have another One Armed Bandit for you to work soon.
June 27, 2013 at 7:54 pm #26762
The Atomic PunkParticipantNo problem at all. The only thing that’s keeping me down right now is my laptop. It up and quits randomly. My new one won’t be in for a few more weeks. I should’ve just bought a tablet…
Digging what you’ve done with Amy Atom.
June 27, 2013 at 8:57 pm #26764
The Atomic PunkParticipantAUX ALIGNEMENTS DE CARNAC
Original design by WMDBASSPLAYER; Story by The Atomic PunkI stand before you as Lady Protector of Bretagne. The strength of her spirit. The passion of her people. The richest in heart. The least in malice.
Before you, I stand as the embodiment of the monoliths, the enduring temples. The countless seasons of wonder. The stones grace these hills. As I grace your presence.
Know that I am here. Know that you are safe in this shrine. Feel my ambivalence and the goodwill of all Bretagne. Bless’ed be.
June 28, 2013 at 12:13 am #26770
WMDBASSPLAYERParticipantThat is really cool! You hint at what I originally had as a concept without being derivative and you’re different enough to never be accused of being lazy and copying with different words, (if any of that makes sense!). I like it! I did another Amy Atom backshot with the pink/purple color scheme, since you played up that part of her look, and a background. I still don’t think I compressed her enough to really bring across the idea that she’s a dwarf, but I’m getting some good practice. I’ll work on some One Armed Bandit shots in urban environments. Meanwhile, check out what I did with him and put in the My New Creations thread.
June 28, 2013 at 1:07 pm #26783
DC-LoverParticipantHeres one for you man. The Human DUmmy
June 28, 2013 at 5:02 pm #26792
WMDBASSPLAYERParticipantCool looking character, DC. Really creepy! Can’t wait to see what Atomic does with him!
June 28, 2013 at 8:57 pm #26801
The Atomic PunkParticipantTHE HUMAN DUMMY
Original Design by DC-Lover; Story by The Atomic PunkAs puppets, we are. I guarded against every villain. I used to arrest them and bring them before a court. How, naïve I was. Thinking that trials would end in justice. I am simpler now; I know who pulls my strings. Take my hand, and I will lead you to a truth. That we are all puppets. And curtains fall.
June 29, 2013 at 11:25 am #26820
WMDBASSPLAYERParticipantGreat! So much with such simplicity! I can see a helluva full length story following this. Here’s another One Armed Bandit for you and after this I’ll try to make some urban scenes with him and Amy.
June 30, 2013 at 10:11 am #26862
The Atomic PunkParticipantDANCING IN THE MOONLIGHT
Original Design by WMDBASSPLAYER; Story by The Atomic PunkDreams, the nightly festivals of hope and freedom. All is right in the netherworld. Thoughts manifest themselves, avatars of wishes and plans. Frugal Squirrel, planning and saving, yet he is quick to panic. A reminder to be wary but not overreact to the slightest change.
Blind Bat, hunting and navigating by echo. Always speak with purpose. You do not have to see to believe. Take a moment to listen to yourself. Joyful rabbit, idling and playing. No need to waste your time worrying. Be wary, though. Look to the corner of your eye now and then.
Lumbering Bear, growling and roaring. You do not have to resort to violence to protect what is yours. Often, proclaiming intention and resolve are deterrent enough.
Fanciful Fawn, an expression of oneself. Whether being true or how one wishes to be perceived. How one feels on the inside or shows to the outside. The want to be at peace in the woodland dreamscape or accepted in the waking world.
The night is coming to an end. In a strange twist, it is the sylvan creatures’ turn to sleep. As I descend to the earth, I can feel the feathers shedding. Clouds give way. Sunrise clears the forest.
Melancholy weighs heavy on my heart. Already, I miss soaring through the twilight. To see it all with such clarity; to be untouchable. I rise to carry hope and freedom into a new day. Even an old horse can dream.
June 30, 2013 at 10:16 am #26863
DC-LoverParticipantI loved what ya did with Tank(plus look forward to any future stories involving him) and the Human Dummy. So i thought Id post Shooting Star. Hes a well made character that i have had trouble thinking of a background for so here ya go.
June 30, 2013 at 10:24 am #26864
JR19759KeymasterAP, I’d be interested to see what sort of story you’d come up with for these two characters.
(Picture by Harlekin, Characters by me.)June 30, 2013 at 2:25 pm #26871
WMDBASSPLAYERParticipantLOVE IT, ATOMIC!!! Nice use of the set up “twist”! Totally didn’t think of one of the companions being the focus! Look forward more great stories!
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