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    Stormbride
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    I stumbled upon Heromachine quite a while back but somehow never got around to really testing it.
    So this week I finally took some time and here it is, my very first character drawing made with Heromashine.
    Let me know what you all think of it.
    http://www.heromachine.com/wp-content/legacy/forum-image-uploads/stormbride/2013/08/Jocelyn-Coat-with-BG-Final_Medium.png
    This is one of my Shadowrun characters, a Moon Druid (Moon Maiden in 4th Ed).

    #24328

    The Atomic Punk
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    Willkommen, Stormbride! I think the red and blue outfit works well with the black coat. I see the attempt at perspective with her right arm and hand shifted toward the back. However, it looks disproportionate. Hope that helps.

    #20970

    Stormbride
    Member

    @The Atomic Punk said:

    Willkommen, Stormbride! I think the red and blue outfit works well with the black coat. I see the attempt at perspective with her right arm and hand shifted toward the back. However, it looks disproportionate. Hope that helps.

    It looked worse before. ;)
    I hope I’ll get better with more experience. :)

    #24458

    djuby
    Participant

    Welcome to the forums. Please read the rules and check out the galleries. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

    #8760

    Jeimuzu
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    Welcome, love that bright moonlit backround. I agree with The Atomic Punk about the hand thing, other than that, solid character Smile

    #8429

    Herr D
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    mmmm? Body and legs staying as they are, grow the arms and hands and bring the head and all down? Eight heads to height, arms thinner than legs but just as long–the grid option helps.

    Good first re-edit, though. Megan Fox in a duster look.Smile

    #8426

    WMDBASSPLAYER
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    Welcome. Better than some of my first efforts!

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