Looks better to me too. Only thing for me is, I would put a shadow on or darken the neck. The way it is now you lose the outline of the face, which I really liked.
I can’t stay awake, nor can I sleep
banished, lost from sight, reality has faded
and before my eyes, appears the gray
twilight as my guide, barely remains
Heaven take me I
Cant see further my
sight has left me and
I can’t save her please
@Vamp, HK & JDJ- thanks
@CantDraw- Thanks. Good luck on getting the book, I don’t even want to go anywhere near it. As for the Colours Fade “poem”, no I didn’t write it, it’s a selection of lyrics from the song that inspired the piece.
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