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After the fact, I thought of several possible directions to take it. One idea was Amy transported to an alternate Earth to hunt down the murderous O.A.B. or the original Bandit going to take on the killer Bandit and stealing his alt. earth tech, whatever that might be. Just keep in mind the original One Armed Bandit is basically a thrill seeking thief who would rather avoid direct, hand to hand confrontation, and let his gadgetry work for him. A brilliant guy who is also a real jerk. You handle the characters personalities very well. For the sake of continuity, we should come up with an explanation as to how the original O.A.B. found out about the alternate earths. Or not; it could be something that just develops as the storyline grows. Also, from now on, I think I’m going to follow your example and focus on writing with just a few pictures to illustrate characters and key scenes, instead of the actual comic format I did with Amy’s origin and what I attempted with your first alt earth story with Ivy and Short Arm Law. I really bit off more than I could chew there!