Re: Camruth’s Alterniverse

[Herr D]

I can’t tell you whether I just find the brown one more interesting, or whether the inevitable dialogue tickles me more.

“I’m Redback!”
[first gangster turns slightly] “Benny? Go over ‘dere. It’s easier to shoot red in the dark.”
[Benny starts moving]
“NO, you IDIOTS! There’s no red on my back!”
“Den wot for you called Redback?”
[Shink!] “You must be new to Australia.”
“He’s got spikes, boss!”
“Shoot him”
[he dodges up the wall, then down onto Benny]
“arrrgk”
“You Aussie weirdo!” [Blammblammblamm–shink swish]
“My arm!”
[Redback removes gun from twitching hand, tosses arm to boss] “They have a great hospital right next to the airport. Maybe they’ll sew it back on before you fly home. Better hurry–you have venom in your system, and this gun is about to kill several local criminals.” [leaves straight up wall]

*It’s definitely both together . . .