Son4’s ” ACES “

So I’m basically a habitual lurker who’s finally decided to join the fun….

I decided to start by sharing some characters I’ve created for a web comic concept that popped into my head one day and decided to set up shop. The idea is a sprawling superhero/black ops epic , basically D.C.’s “Checkmate” meets H.B.O’s “The Wire” . The main story revolves around a covert unit of the fictional G.S.O (Global Security Organization) lacking an official name(officially it does’nt even exist) it is referred to by those who have knowledge of it as “The Deck”. The operatives are a mix of spies , soldiers , former superheroes and villains and the operation utilizes a ranking system based on playing cards . The first story arc will be about the creation of a new team of “ACES” the top operatives who take on the toughest jobs. I will be using Heromachine to create the character models for an artist I am working with . Looking around the forum , there seems to be allot of knowledgeable people here when it comes to comics /writing/character creation . It would be cool to get your take on these concepts and characters,so I could tweak or drop anything that might not be working . I have a really thick skin , so feel free let loose . I only ask that you keep a couple of things in mind. (1) The characters I create are just basic models for the artist to go on so they may look kind of raw. (2) Right now this is just something we are doing to exercise our long neglected writing/drawing/web skills , we are two long time comic book fans who always wanted to create our own world and now where just going for it.
So enough talking lets get to the art!!