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September 1, 2013 at 8:38 pm
#30856
The Atomic Punk
Participant
Thanks, WMD. Let’s say that I had some “assistance” when writing your request. I’m not happy with it, personally. Here’s a second version.
THE HIRELINGS
Original Design by WMDBASSPLAYER; Story by The Atomic Punk
“Hey, Frank, you feeling stupid right now?â€
“What? I’m not following, Brenna.â€
“Why are we guarding this path? The demon can fly. We’re standing here with our backs to the fight.â€
“You know, now that you mention…â€
“Frank, the satyr didn’t hire us to help catch a demon. This is an ambush!â€