Re: Community Effort Idea

While I’m here as well, I’ve had a crack at designing what I think the full Ascension cyborgs look like at the start of the story. I would have liked to incorporate Iscarioto’s arm, but the text doesn’t work. I imagined that the participants limbs would have to be removed in order for the enhancements to be fused to their body, which is why there is so much scaring. As the story goes on the design will obviously become much sleeker as Iscarioto said in his basic ideas.
As well as the limb enhancements, I’d imagine these guys would be fitted with some sort of advanced targeting system replacing their right eye. Obvious weak points would have to be removed, especially on the male participants (cyborgs wouldn’t need them anyway, no need to procreate). And with all that, some sort of painkilling solution would need to be administered to stop the cyborg collapsing from the pain of the enhancements, so for the current series, this will be taken orally, until some sort of intravenous system can be devised.

I’ll also include the text, incase anyone else wants to add to/edit my current design. Escpecially if you want to add Iscarioto’s enhancement arm.