Reply To: Gjc6664's Superverse

For advice on the nose (literally), I recommend swapping the colors. Right now, it sticks out from the rest of the face (heh) in a bad way. The default color order for noses is just generally wrong, in my opinion. Could just be my personal taste, though

As for shading, this is not a bad start. One important thing to remember is that Ember’s flames are also a light source! That will affect the rest of the shading. You can use the same circular gradients that you use in shading to add a glow to the flames, for instance. That will also mean that e.g. this guy’s lower arms will be brighter than his upper arms, since the lower arms are closer to the flames.