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Suleman
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That looks really cool!

The pose is basic but the slight angulation of the torso means it still looks dynamic. Nice job with the highlights and shading, too. Design-wise, no major problems. However, since you wanted our ideas, I’ll give you some.

One thing that bothers me is that his face seems a bit too small for his head. The eyes, the nose and especially the mouth could be a bit bigger and a bit more apart.

The dragon on his t-shirt looks a bit separate from the rest of the design. It doesn’t fold where the t-shirt folds, for instance. Could you try and mask it onto his shirt, so that it looks more like a part of the shirt? You might be able to achieve the same effect by making a shirt with only line colors visible and putting that on a layer above the dragon symbol.